Celestia was on the balcony staring at the sky and stars until she heard the door to her room open, “Sister, we have a visitor”, said Luna with Twilight by her side.
Celestia looked at the two allicorns before approaching, “Hi, my name is Celestia, what’s your name?” asked Celestia with a smile for Twilight Sparkle.
“My name is Twilight Sparkle”, Twilight Sparkle almost screamed with joy.
“It’s a pleasure to meet you, Twilight Sparkle”, said Celestia.
“Twilight Sparkle, do you know where you’re staying?” asked Luna.
Suddenly, Twilight Sparkle panicked, “oh my god! I don’t have it!” Twilight Sparkle was so curious to know more about the timelines that she forgot to plan where to sleep.
“I’ll send you to Ponyville so you can stay with my student”, said Luna.
“Do you have a student?” asked Twilight Sparkle.
“Yes, her name is Sunset Shimmer”, replied Luna. “I’ll organize the carriage”
“But where does she live in Ponyville?” asked Twilight Sparkle.
“At the Golden Oka’s Tree Library,” replied Luna before leaving the room to organize the carriage, leaving Twilight Sparkle and Celestia alone in the room.
Twilight Sparkle was in the carriage, Luna’s guards were taking the carriage to Ponyville. Twilight Sparkle was having so many thoughts in her head about that timeline she was. Celestia was not the ruler, it was Luna. The ponies here were nocturnal and not diurnal. And Sunset Shimmer was Luna’s student. Luna’s guards were taking her to Ponyville and not the Celestia's guards. This timeline really, in every moment, made her more curious.
After a few hours of travel, the carriage passed near the Golden Oka’s Tree Library. She went to the door and hit her.
Hooves were heard and the door opened revealing Sunset Shimmer, “hello, good evening”, greeted Sunset Shimmer with a smile.
“Hi, my name is Twilight Sparkle”, introduced Twilight Sparkle.
“It’s a pleasure to meet you, Twilight Sparkle”, said Sunset Shimmer. “Would you like to come in?”
“Yes, please”, said Twilight Sparkle.
Twilight Sparkle came into the library and saw a baby dragon red with orange scales.
“Garble, we have a visitor,” said Sunset Shimmer as she closed the door.
Garble looked at Sunset Shimmer, “Should I prepare a snack?” asked Garble.
“Yes, please, Garble”, said Sunset Shimmer.
Garble went to the kitchen to prepare the snack.
Sunset Shimmer realized that Twilight Sparkle was a alicorn and bowed, “forgive me my ways, I didn’t realize I had a pony of royalty in my library”
“No need to bend over”, said Twilight Sparkle.
Sunset Shimmer got up and introduced the library to Twilight Sparkle. Although Twilight Sparkle already knew the library, after all, she lived there before be destroyed by Lord Tirek.
“The snack is ready!” Garble called Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle to eat.
Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle went downstairs and were eating the cookies that Garble prepared.
“So, are you on another timeline?” asked Sunset Shimmer as she ate the cookie. “That explains why I’ve never seen you before in Canterlot or in Ponyville”
“I’m just here to meet this timeline, then I’m going back to my original timeline”, explained Twilight Sparkle.
“I can show you here, if you like,” offered Sunset Shimmer with a smile.
“I’d love to”, said Twilight Sparkle with a smile.
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HOLY SHIT
that is epic!!!
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Just one thing to say: SLOW THE HELL DOWN
Me, trying to read this.
So I'm guessing Twilight hasn't met her Sunset yet
Wow I’m so excited to see what happens next. I’m really enjoying this story!!
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You do realize that this is set after Equestria Girls, right?
It's not even good timeline if Luna has two students and Celestia didn't. Also Garble is Sunset pet dragon?
This is not how Celestia would introduce herself. Going by this timelines version where Celestia was sealed for 1000 years, should logically speak in old English while also using a royal greeting, she uses neither here.
I have to agree with Hardie-Boy, the story goes WAY too fast for its own good. Everything is rushed and the characters don't act like how they should be.
This chapter can be summarized like this as a result of the rushed script:
Luna: Say hello to my sister.
Celestia: Hello Twilight, My name is Celestia.
Twilight: Hello Celestia, My name is Twilight.
Luna: You will go and meet my student now.
Twilight: ok.
*later at ponyville*
Twilight: Hello Sunset Shimmer, my name is Twilight Sparkle.
Sunset: Hello Twilight Sparkle, my name is Sunset Shimmer. Wanna eat snacks with me and Garble?
Twilight: Sure! By the way I'm from an alternate timeline.
Sunset: cool.
*chapter ends*