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BronyBraeburn


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Discord's back to haunt Twilight for imprisoning him a second time. Has he found a new way to escape? Some unexpected allies come in to stop the draconequus forever, but are Twilight Sparkle and the others willing to pay such a price?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

A lovely story!

I admire the detail that you put into your writing; you know the characters extremely well. Your writing is fluid.

My only complaint is that everything after Celestia puts Twilight back to sleep feels tacked on; I would have stopped the story sooner.

Keep on writing!

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oooooohhhhh yeeeesssssss this is a fic i will follow...good work my friend!

:twilightsmile: AC reference...

All I can say is that is was shorter than I expected it to be, but it was perfect.:ajsmug:
Great job.

Excellent writing. Very fluid, dynamic, etc.
Characters are well written, and Discord is just chilling here.
Loved the interaction between Twilight and Celestia. Very heart-warming.

Very well done.

Excellent writing combined with a brilliant portrayal of the philosophy of morals and an ending that is so warming, it's causing heartburn.

I'm serious, this is just a perfect story.:twilightsmile:

Discord did not die! I am soooo happy!:pinkiehappy: the story did scare me a bit though I thought it was nice in general.:twilightsmile:

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