Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
Mixtape is no stranger to parties.
She loves going to Molly's house.
They're close, personal friends.
She goes there a lot.
This is one of those times.
More of my 3 am nonsense. Experimental story just for the sake of writing something different. I'm not quite sure I hit the mark here, but I'm kind of pleased with the way it flows and my presentation of Mixtape's disjointed drug-addled thoughts. Don't expect much out of this- seriously.
* A 3 AM Rarity short*
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This was excellent. I thought you did a great job of capturing the feeling of complete disconnection from the world that goes with an epic pilling session - I was worried the coloured text gimmick might get old, but it really worked for what you were trying to convey. Nice work.
This is a positively fascinating way to tell a story, imo. Colors, sounds and aromas all send each of us different messages and different messages, not only from our memories but also from our instincts. It's distinctive when we are sober. It can be more magnified when one is under the influence of something else or even under duress.
Your use descriptions of MixTapes changing sensations and perceptions were excellent and your use of colors set the moods and feels in this story. I could see how she was feeling. Great way to tell a captivating tale.
Congrats! You get a like.
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One of the best prizes I could ask for! Oh, Thank you so very much darling! Each and everyone of these makes my day just a little bit better!!
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You're welcome.
I was quite a fan of this synesthesia fuelled drug trip! Feels quite similar to the real thing, so either you researched heavily, you're a great guesser, or you've met my friend mandy before. This was inventive use of the BBcode features, it's always enjoyable to see in digital work what you might not be able to experience in print. My only criticism might be that I don't see why this needed to be a pony story! Not that I'm complaining, I wouldn't have found it otherwise.
Strong imagery, good flow, and an awfully relatable premise. I'll have to read more from you.
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I am actively afraid of drugs that would cause this sort of effect. I can assure you, that I've never researched such, so, I suppose that would make me a good guesser.
Insofar as why this is pony related, well, I wanted to use my character 'Mixtape' in something, and she fit the bill. Also, holy cow wow, An intricate disguise is talking to me! And they liked my story!!
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Hey, good guessing is a staple of quality fiction. I wrote my first Sunset Shimmer story without having ever seen the EqG films (I have since) and no one could tell the difference. (On another account, in a time long past.)
Is there more Mixtape fiction in your catalogue? I quite enjoyed her character!
Also, let's not pretend that's a big deal! I'm just a reader like any other, after all.
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I wrote this some 4 or so years ago. Not my worst, but I've improved a great deal with my quality. My first Mixtape story, I believe!
And I'm always tickled to meet a source of inspiration, darling!
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Well, I've got the time, so let's dive in! I'll stop littering up your comments section now, cheers for the recommendation!