Finn's POV
Cozma and I ran as fast as we could through the dense forest to get away from the mares that are trying to catch me. Yes, they don't know about Cozma and her Dark-Dark Fruit powers, and I'd like to keep it that way, the less anyone knows about her, the better it is for us. We ran for a good hour before we finally felt weak enough to stop and rest for a while, we were panting to regain the lost air in our lungs.
"Mister...Finn..." Cozma panted out, "How much...farther...?"
"I think...we're safe...for now..." I tell her.
We sat there panting until we gained our lost air and proceeded to stand up and wander around, hoping to find a way out of the forest without alerting the Element Bearers. After a long while with the sun going down, we found something...rather odd. A weird toll booth surrounded by mostly dead trees, a toxic waste barrel or two, and a muscular bipedal crocodile standing guard on the bridge over a rather unhealthy looking swamp river.
Cozma started clinging to me, scared by his physical appearance, "M-M-M-Mr. Finn...who is that...?"
I narrow my eyes at him, "...I have an idea who it is. Stay behind me." I walk up to him carefully, "Are you, by any chance, Klubba?"
"Do I LOOK like him?" he answered, sarcastically, "Nay, I'm Klubbo, his cousin. Now how do ye know of me cousin? An' don't ye DARE lie to me!"
Yeesh, he even has the pirate dialect... I think before speaking, "Okay, it's like this..." I explain to him how I know Klubba; the game he originated from, his purpose, and the fact that he's just pixels and code on a television screen...at least, that's what I thought, "...And that's pretty much it."
Klubbo leaned in real close and stared into my soul, trying to detect any sense of falsehood from my words, "...Okay, I believe ye."
"R-Really? Just like that?" I say, caught off guard by his answer.
"I don't really get all the talk o' 'video games' or 'pixels and code', but I can tell yer tellin' me the truth. Now that the explanations of me cousin are out o' the way, ear this, landlubbers! To cross me bridge is gonna cost yer many pieces o' eight! An' if yers don't pay up, I'll run yer through like the scurvy dogs ye are, A-harrr! It costs 15...er...whatever currency this world has to cross over, mateys."
"For a minute there I thought you gonna say Kremkoins."
"Yes, but...Kremkoins don't exist in this here land, so a Kremling's gotta make do with what we can find."
"I can understand that." I pull out a small bag of bits and pour 15 bits into my hand, "Will these do?"
Klubbo takes the coins, sniffs them, then takes one tries to bend it with his teeth, but to no avail, "That there's real gold. Thanks for the booty. Ye landlubbers may pass. Just...don't expect me to polish the bridge for ye next time ye come."
"Fine by me. C'mon, Cozma, it's safe now." I say, guiding her pass Klubbo, before he speaks again.
"Just one last thing." we turn to face him as he pulls out something pretty familiar, "Do ye know anything about this here fruit?"
My eyes went wide as I uttered the name, "...The Bomb-Bomb Fruit."
"Ah, so ye DO know. I found this here 'Bomb-Bomb Fruit' growing on one o' me dead trees an' plucked it. I reckon yer gonna find a better use for it than me." he tossed to me as I caught it.
"Why though?"
"I know about them 'Devil Fruits' 'round these parts, so let's just say yer gonna owe me...a favor."
"Well...you already gave it to me, so it's a deal."
Klubbo nods and turns away, "Now get movin'. There are things in that part o' the woods that ye don't want to be just standin' 'round."
"Good idea."
Cozma and I ran ahead as Klubbo simply stood guard at his post once more.
3rd Person POV
Meanwhile, at the Golden Oaks Library, Spike recently just sent Princess Celestia a letter about the Ice-Ice Fruit user's whereabouts, her reply was to keep an eye out and that she was doubling the bounty on him. Now, Spike was helping himself to a midnight glass of milk to try and help him sleep, after he poured his drink, he set the carton down, not noticing what was marked on the side of it...
A picture of a certain dark grey filly with the words:
HAVE YOU SEEN ME?
Lost Filly: Astral Force
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor
Name: jacob
Race: human
Physical Description: white male in his 20s with a Black coat some sweatpants and blond hair.
Personality: a guy with a sense of humor But kind guy over all.
Moral Affiliation: will put his friends needs over his own
Devil Fruit (Optional): flame flame fruit (not eaten yet).
Backstory: he was a man who tried to get his life back together after his dad died when let’s just say he got a weird package
on his door step.
Ps I’m loving the story so far keep it up.
10677168 Thanks for the OC, I’ll see what I can do
For our mystery pony, my guess is Sunset Shimmer.
Name: Nathan
Race: Human
Physical Description: Tanned, non-binary, blue eyes, 20s, looks like a young man, wears a plaid shirt, blue jeans, short, red hair, and blue sneakers.
Personality: Friendly and helpful. Scary when angry.
Moral Affiliation: Helps those who needs help.
Devil Fruit: Operate-Operate Fruit (eaten)
Backstory: They're a doctor at a hospital in Italy. Nathan had woke up one morning and found themself in Equestria. They found a package with the Devil Fruit right in front of them. They are currently traveling around with two other Devil Fruit users, a man and a woman.
10677525 Thank you for your OC, I need a little more to go on with the physical description, like hair color and length, but good job
Also, now you got me curious on who this man and woman are...just this once, I’ll allow a freebie: if you can provide the character sheets of the man and woman, I’ll allow them into the story as well, and if they’re human, I need a Devil Fruit for each of them and whether or not they’ve eaten them.
Name: Nerxco (the R. Is silent.)
Race: Human
Physical Description: average height with a scar by the his lips like the forced smile.
Black long coat with a homemade three piece suits stitched from other clothes. Shout black hire cut with a with red hire die. Left eye blue that blood shot with a tattoo of a raven right eye hazel. Wearing a red big rimed Fedora. Body shape slender.
Personality: Damaged and completely insane.
Moral Affiliation: unknown for now.
Devil Fruit (Optional): Tremor-Tremor Fruit, or String-String fruit, Quick-Quick fruit, or last one, Change-Change fruit.
Backstory: locked away in a mental asylum sense childhood until he woken in Equestria having no idea how he got there. Holding a present saying fresh start enjoy.
What do you think?
Name: Sasha
Race: Human
Physical Description: Slim, Goth, 19-years-old, light skin, blue eyes, wears a black shirt with a skull on the front, jean jacket on top, black pants, long, black hair, and black shoes.
Personality: Dark and brooding.
Moral Affiliation: She helps others who are in trouble even if she might end up involved in the trouble too since she does help her little siblings out most of the times.
Devil Fruit: Soul-Soul Fruit (eaten)
Backstory: She was listening to some music on her phone while filling an application online for a job, when suddenly, she fell unconscious. When she woke up, she was found by Nathan. Also, there was a package for her with a Devil Fruit inside. Sasha is currently traveling around with Nathan and some guy.
Name: Akamai
Race: Human
Physical Description: Male, in his 30s, big, strong, has muscles, tanned skin, brown eyes, blonde, spiky hair, small beard, red shirt with Hawaiian flowers, blue shorts, yellow sandals,
Personality: Positive, hard-working, and loyal. Gets angry when he sees people getting bullied.
Moral Affiliation: Fights for those who can't fight back. He beats up the strong who pick on the weak.
Devil Fruit: Cook-Cook Fruit (eaten)
Backstory: Akamai was working at his parent's restaurant, when suddenly, some mysterious guy grab him by the front of his shirt and threw him over the counter. When he rolled over on the floor and about to fight the guy, he then somehow found himself on some grass in the forest. Akamai then had met Nathan and Sasha who came across him after they had smelled something delicious. He was cooking food after using his Devil Fruit powers, which he had gotten after a Devil Fruit fell onto his head and he ate it. They decided to travel together since Akamai needed the company, and Nathan and Sasha needed food. Also, they felt bad for Akamai since he looked lonely.
Will the fact that seawater paralyzes anyone who eats Devil Fruit play a big role in this story?
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How come none of you actually told the author what your fan-made Devil Fruits actually give the eater the ability to do?
Name: Khaine (Alias Real name Montgomery)
Race: Human
Physical Description: White male in his mid 20s,with a buzz cut and mild facial hair.
Personality: Laid back and easy going, protective over this he considers friends.
Moral Affiliation: Good guy and loyal friend but isn't above petty acts of vengeance on enemies.
Devil Fruit (Optional): Gol-Gol Fruit (Eaten)
Backstory: A smith working out of his home, he found a package and opened it up as he thought it had been the new items he had bought before waking up in the Everfree.
10677774 We’ll see where it goes, I’ve been working on this story for a while, believe it or not, and just never had the chance to finish some of the chapters yet. Also, I like to look up the Devil Fruits because I don’t know all of them yet and I think it’s better if I get as much info as I can, so I know the full capabilities of the specific fruits and not burden the readers so much
10677775 Thanks, maybe he’ll bump into Finn and Cozma next chapter
10677607 Not bad, but do I choose which of the Devil Fruits you suggested?
Name: Collin
Race: Human
Physical Description: White male, early 20s, missing is left eye, no shirt, wears a pair of jeans
Personality: Carefree around those that he trust but due to his trust issues that's hard to get
Moral Affiliation: He fights for his friends
Devil Fruit (Optional): Flame Flame Fruit
Backstory: Not a good life back on earth has he got into fights regularly which caused him to lose his eye and trust in people
10677818 Thanks, but the Flame-Flame Fruit has been taken
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Damn guess I missed a few comments. Could I change it? Or is there no point?
10677882 Change it if you could please, is there another Devil Fruit that catches your interest?
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Yeah Bird Bird fruit model Phoenix
10677892 Okay, thanks
I want to suggest the Human-Human Fruit ending up with either the elements or the Princesses and one of their pets eating it. Mainly the idea of Twilight's owl, Philomena, or Rarity's cat being able to be understood by their owners is hilarious to me. Also maybe having tank end up eating some variant of the Tweet-Tweet Fruit (like a hummingbird model) to become a tortoise-bird once Rainbow adopts him.
Name:Gabriel
Race:Human
Physical Description:Tall, average build, black hair, brown eyes, black tanktop with baggy black sweatpants.
Personality: Monotone but funny, calm guy and is fairly nice to anyone.
Moral Affiliation:Strict to his moral code of staunch justice *Lawful Good*
Devil Fruit (Optional):Yuki Yuki no Mi(No idea what the english translation is but its the snow one)
Backstory:Previous soldier that lost his will to go on after combat and losing his comrades, until he recieves a package.
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Ok if you haven’t got plans for there two.the Tremor-Tremor Fruit, or String-String fruit.
If you have anyone else in mind I’ll choose a different one.
10678300 All the fruits you suggested are still up for grabs, I just didn’t know which one to give your OC
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Ok in that String-String fruit mostly based on his out fit. Plus with the Tremor-Tremor fruit he’ll be OP. Sorry for not making up my mind.
10678045 Thanks, and yes, I believe it's called the Snow-Snow Fruit, I looked it up once to see what it was
10678524 Okay, thanks
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Glade to help.
Name: Walker
Race: Human
Physical Description: White Male in their mid 20's dressed in desert camo.
Personality: Generally introverted reading fantasy(and history if interesting enough) and being out in nature.
Moral Compass: Prefers to be alone but can be very caring once someone manages to befriend them.
Devil Fruit: Suna-Suna No Mi (Sand-Sand Fruit)
Backstory: Nature photographer who was brought outside of Klugetown after finding the Sand-Sand Fruit while out taking pictures on a safari. Upon figuring out what he has due to reading many manga he would consume it and train to use it in a combination of Crocodile and Gaara's skills. Examples being Crocodiles super reflex to transform subconsciously and to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand) and learns to manipulate sand to the degree shown by Gaara.
Name: Fizzle Poofshake
Race: Earth Pony
Physical Description: cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/646787475364380675/810850308132700210/Adoptable_1_-_Mega_Hair_Pony_separate.png (I'm bad at describing pones with a design that already exists)
Personality: He's a bit of a recluse, preferring to be alone, though he doesn't mind interaction between other creatures. He will kick the crap out of those who would harm him and his family, though he won't do so without reason. And he will also find out the truth behind certain things before he jumps to conclusions.
Moral Affiliation: He will do his best to help his friends and family as much as he can, whether that be by kicking some dumbpony's hind quarters or by lending some bits to those in need.
Devil Fruit: The Kame-Kame no Mi or the Turtle Turtle Fruit. (Eaten)
Backstory: Fizzle Poofshake was born into the village of Ponyville to a loving family. He has a good job working as a shake maker in one of Ponyville's sweets shops, if not the owner of a shake shop himself. He usually spends his time in his home, making shakes and what not. One time when he was out in the woods for one of his daily strolls, he saw a strange fruit on the ground. He was feeling a bit hungry, so he thought what would be the harm in eating a fruit that no one seemed to care about. Even though it tasted horrible, he wasn't just going to spit it out. And when he returned home, he discovered his new powers, and since he's read the wanted poster about this Ice-Ice Creature, he thinks that his case will be similar to that creature. As such, he will do his best to hide his newfound powers from the Element Bearers and his friends.
10680304 Thanks, I’ll do what I can, I’m currently brainstorming how he’ll meet fellow Devil Fruit users and who he meets
Name: Dan
Race: Human
Physical Description: white male in his 30s wears a Jeans with a blue shirt and an Imperial Japanese Navy cap with a Katana
Personality: a guy with an odd sense of humor rather be a bit sarcastic
Moral Affiliation: put people before himself
Devil Fruit (Optional):
Backstory: he was a working man just trying to get though life by working hard until a strange package appeared on his doorstep thinking that his own brother was playing a joke on him
ps. I like this story
10686459 Thanks, but I don’t see a Devil Fruit in the sheet, are you saying your human OC was sent to Equestria without one?
Ok pal. I got a OC in mind
Name: Jack Talonwing
Species: Pony(Unicorn)/ Dragon mix.
Age: 24
Personality: A general good fellow who love hanging with friends. Can be little rude and grumpy in the early mornings and when he is hungry but he doesn't mean it. It just happens. Has a hard time explaining his actions but he means well most of the time. Loves puns but also hates to hear them.
Moral Affiliation: Will go to the ends of the world to help his friends.
Devil Fruit: Slow-Slow Fruit (Uneaten but has with him)
Body Color (Pony Form): Tan colored.
Eye color (Pony Form) Blue.
Mane Color: Brownish blonde.
Clothing: Short Sleeved shirt. Skull pattern on it. Red Short.
Height: 5'6
Abilities: (Pony Form): Is a master of Fire and Ice magic. Can summon Ghost like weapons to work for him. Is able to Imbue weapons in fire and ice. Is a Master Sword User in both Normal Pony Form and Dragon Form. Has a good amount of Magic in him and a high amount of energy.
Weapon: Carries a Sword around his back that looks like Alastor In both Pony and Dragon form.
Form: Can change into his Dragon form at will but takes up a good amount of Energy to do so. Can stay in that form as long as he wants until he changes back.
Scales (Dragon Form): Purple and red mix.
Eye color (Dragon Form): Blood Red
Height: 5'10.
Wingspan: 5 feet.
Abilities (Dragon Form): While he looses the ability to use most of his Unicorn magic. Along with breathing fire he can channel his ice magic into a icy dragon breath.
Likes: Having a good time with friends. Apple Pies. Noodle dishes. Seeing happy children. Loves eating any kind of food.
Dislikes: Rude folk, People stealing unless they have a honest and good reason. Thugs.
Bio: Was born from a Male Dragon and a Female Unicorn. He got traits from both his parents. Like he can eat meat from his dragon dad and can stomach it. While being a Unicorn from his pony mom. Was picked on for having a dragon dad by others but he brushes it off and doesn't let it bother him.. At least that is what he tells himself. At the age of 10 he started to feel this fire in the pit of his stomach. He was in no end of pain and his mother didn't know what was going on. But his father did. He explained that he might be able to change into a dragon. Jack's body slowly started to change into a dragon confirming what his father said. At first he could not control when he changed or how he acted. But with the help of both his parents he was able to gain control of it. Around 16 he started to train in Swordmanship to defend his village from bandits. He did this for 3 years til the mayor decided to hire guards to defend the town. Jack trained the guards and now they defend the village with him. At the age of 22 he went to travel the world to see what it had in store for it. At 27 he found a strange fruit with swirls on it. He doesn't know what it is but takes it anyways. Just in case he needs a snack.
Fears: Being rejected. Heights. Being seen as a monster or freak by those that he holds close too.
Hope this helps and I'd love to see my oc in the story.
10691970 Thanks for your OC, but Finn already collected the Rumble-Rumble Fruit, sorry