“I’m so sick of it all! I don’t want to live like this anymore! Maybe everyone will be better off if I just...end it all. Right here and now.”
Sunset Shimmer is broken; lost in a deep dark pit of despair. Since the Friendship Games, she’s been having... thoughts. Thoughts that might drive her to do scary things. These scary things isn’t what she wanted. Or so she thought they weren’t. Yet, maybe it’s just her fate to... disappear.
"Does friendship, really carry on through the ages?"
Here's my own personal Sunset Shimmer suicide story! I had to make one for myself :)
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Note: I don't believe ANY of the things I wrote about Sunny and Twily in this!
Enjoy :)
Chapters (1)
Just gonna drop these here because suicide descriptions can be triggers for people who are struggling:
Suicide hotline
Crisis lines international
Hah
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thx bruh!
Well, that was dark. When I first read the title I thought this was something to do with the recent S9 reveal.
I wanna know the person who pushed Sunset!
(Great story btw
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Haha thx
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*cough* twilight*cough*
They're are clues at the end and in between that points it out. It's all about the mystery ;)
Will there be a sequel?
This was... messy. As an example:
This highlights the importance of the direct address comma. Is Rarity talking about a student named Darling being tutored? Is she referring to Twilight as "darling"? This is also why when "darling" is used as a direct address, it isn't capitalized.
That quote also had an issue with dialogue punctuation. Here's a handy guide from a handy guy on how to do dialogue punctuation correctly:
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I see.
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Shoot, I can't believe I messed that up! Thanks.
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Yes. It will be a series. Check it out here.
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Will there be justice?
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Wait & see...
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Oh COME ON!
It going to be one of those types?!
Ok ok...I'm not going to judge, but hoping be a decent ending and not one of those the murder gets away with it but gets punished in a manner that leaves the reader unsatisfied type of stories.
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yes yes, it will be a worth reading decent ending. The last story will be after My Way. I'm not putting the title up until later tho. Currently, I'm still working on the last few chapters of A Reminder of Hope. The sequel to this story will be up after I get that story done and out of the way.
How exactly does one get "featured In suicide?"
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If you click on my story and scroll beneath "Also Liked," you'll see where it says featured in suicide. Every character/genre has a featured section. I guess the creators of the site decide.