I demand more! The fanbase demands more!

9516107
Agreed let there be more

I love how this dude is so calm and collected

More!!!!!!!

Every sentient being demand more!

Would a bof

9516241
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you're liking it so far. I have an idea for Harvest and Szarekh's bond I want to try, if it works, yay!
Elsewise I rewrite those bits.

I'm not altogether certain how a traumatized child would act in this scenario, but I've seen cases where they almost instantly bond to their saviors, and that's the situation I want to roll with.

I'm still working out the finer points of Szarekh's personality, so bear with me, and feel free to point out any mistakes or issues you find.

Thanks again,
Alt.

9516241
To be fair, we ARE talking about a child, who had a traumatic experience, then was rescued by someone who promised to help them... Between shock and the joy of being rescued, and also from being a magical pony foal, it is entirely possible that said child latched onto their rescuer this quickly.

After all, in reality, such things can happen almost, if not as, fast with children immediately trusting people who rescue them from similar fates...even if most of those are police officers and are told to trust said officers by parents and people in authority(teachers and such)

Edit: Also remember this is still the SAME DAY, that their parent's died...yeah, maybe it's a bit fast, but since the attack, all Harvest had was our Protagonist saying he'd take care of them, and made a promise about it... And to many children, a promise is unbreakable if said by an adult.

me when i see a new update for this story. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-istquWjZ8M

9517855
Same 😂

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a cartoonish Szarekh

Harvest is a bit too clingy to Serakh. He’s a stranger. While in some cases children do do this patching thing, I doubt it applies in this case.

This is a bit too sappy but it doesn't really matter that much