The Path We Walk

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Argent and Aegis, long time friends of Princess Celestia, return from a 5 year campaign of fighting in the far eastern lands. The happy reunion is shaken when Celestia, having a strong love for both of them, finally makes her choice between the two; which leads to hard changes, choices and the search for a new path in life for one of them.

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The Path We Walk: Chapter 1 · 6th Mar 2019 · 2,654 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 2 · 6th Mar 2019 · 2,906 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 3 · 6th Mar 2019 · 4,162 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 4 · 6th Mar 2019 · 6,371 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 5 · 6th Mar 2019 · 5,365 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 6 · 6th Mar 2019 · 4,355 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 7 · 6th Mar 2019 · 4,646 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 8 · 6th Mar 2019 · 6,052 words
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The Path We Walk: Chapter 9 · 6th Mar 2019 · 4,556 words
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Toriandthehorse #1 · Sep 16th, 2019 · · · The Path We Walk: Chapter 1 ·

“I know.” Twilight took a sip. “Life has gotten so much… busier, especially with the new school of friendship. Days just fly by anymore.”

A quick fix, but found a spelling error here..
I also found that the beginning was a bit dragged out, and then everything sped up toward the end. Perhaps consider editing the transition from day to night to day again, or edit the beginning to make it a bit shorter; something like that.
Aside from that, this was a fine story. You have my thumbs up.