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This story is a sequel to The Wheel and the Butterfly A Dan X Pinkie Pie Saga


Dan’s already extraordinary life has grown even more fantastic ever since Pinkie Pie came into his life, home, and bed. The human and humanified pony have brought out the best/worst in one another, bolstered the ranks of the Dan Army, evaded enemies from petty criminals to extra dimensional horrors, and gone on countless adventures to clothing stores together. Even Chris and Elise, after adjusting to the changes, have grown much happier and closer thanks to Pinkie’s presence in their lives. Ignoring the odd doomsday calamity, all seems right for this bunch of oddballs.

But now a new stranger has crossed the dimensional barrier. Suave and suspiciously charismatic, he wields intimate knowledge of the pair that defies explanation, possesses dangerous abilities, and yet claims his intentions are purely benign, at least towards them and their friends. Is he telling the truth? What is this ‘significant event’ he has prophesized? How many characters in this story actually wear underwear?

Only one way to find out.

Based on the beloved The Wheel and the Butterfly by Justice3442 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/131002/the-wheel-and-the-butterfly-a-dan-x-pinkie-pie-saga As with many of us, I loved the story so much that, in my impatience for its continuation, I ended up making my own. I tried to make this story as self-contained as possible, with only teasers here and there of this wonderful world Justice3442 has built, so reading the 200+ chapters of the original should not be necessary to understand what I’ve written here. However, I absolutely recommend you go and check out the original for your own sake. You won’t be disappointed.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

9488847
Hmm. I guess you're as big a fan of the source material as I am.

LOVED the previous Dan & Pinkie stuff....but this? Not so much. As in...I didn't actually enjoy it enough to go anywhere near the end unfortunately. The whole "narrator overly interjecting in a 4th wall break" and "Pinkie keeps referencing/talking to the narrator" thing, just gets...old. It wasn't too to okay, but the more it dragged on the less I was able to appreciate this story. @.@

9492961
Well shit. I can at least say this particular gag won't be making an appearance in the future, but I'm sorry the rest fell so flat.

9493055
Well even the best shows can have a thing that some find overly distracting. Still based off what you said I will definitely read the next chapter ^^

9493261
Besides I was able to enjoy your last story the whole way through! That's more than I can say about some of the other Dan VS crossovers <.<;

Also one thing I CAN take out of this story is...how I never noticed that 90%+ of the time, people tend to wear the same clothes in that show!! Which was even MORE amazing when you referenced how INSANE it made people when Pinkie was talking about switching things up so much. Would have loved to see a more detail "Picture" of that, unless it was in the previous story and I forgot, in which case my apologies.

Hopefully next time we can get a good dose of that infamous Dan Snark that we all know and love <3
(If only it wasn't put on such a wholesome and less insane channel as Ponies. I DO really think Dan VS could still be alive now if it was put on Cartoon Network, considering how subversive and/or controversial many of their shows are)

9493360
The clothing thing was indeed pulled from the source material. And I also hope that Dan may get a continuation someday, although its doubtful.

9493744
The only way to make that happen is probably to get picked up by Netflix tbh

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