Also known as Persistent Cloudburst
Spitfire has wanted to join the Wonderbolts for almost her entire life, and now she finally has the chance to work alongside her idol. However, when complications arise involving her attendance to the Grand Galloping Gala, will she be able to handle everything that comes her way once the proverbial midden hits the windmill?
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The only thing i see missing (other than more chapters) is that there aren't any thing saying like 5pm Wednesday or that she went to a different room or anything along those lines until the last paragraph but other than that good job.
Keep making these
I'm really interested in reading more chapters!
1049154 Exactly what I am missing... it gives it a bit of a longer feal like your reading and it says:
5 P.M after an hour of reading it says:
5 30 P.M
and im like:OMG this is taking for ever!!!!