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ooo fun times to follow!
I frecking love these two
She's her own cousin?
I think you need to fix that.
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Yes I really should do that! I am so sorry!
I thought we were going to get to see his parent's reaction to her Kirin form.
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I told you in the next chapter if it is the around the birth one
👍
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Thanks I must do something right I guess
I don't think I would be naming my kid 'Under Fire', and was also unaware that firearms were a thing in MLP.
{This is me purposely misreading lead (the initiative in an action; an example for others to follow.) as lead (a chemical element with symbol Pb and atomic number 82. It is a heavy metal that is denser than most common materials.) and using the military slang for bullets.}[Yay English.]
Adorable.
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I am glad you think so and I also hope you enjoyed the scene I added for you
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About how his father looked at Danger's Kirin/Nirik form?
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Yep, the whole scene through, not only his naughty approval but the entire scene.
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I know.
I loved it!
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I love how it very subtly hints that the interspecies 'intrest' is likely hereditary.
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Now that you mention it... Honestly I haven't thought about that aspect, it was more coming from the fact that all Dragons have a liking for fire, which Kirin-Fluffy has a lot of, and what does run in the family is the liking for fluffiness on the males side, that combined caused his father to approve that much. Though, the interspecies interest as you call it seems to run in the family too to a degree:derpytongue2:
So adorable!!!
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It is a trick! To get free lifts!
I know it's pride month, but due to an issue with a certain German not understanding all the intricacies with the English language, The Black Death almost unwittingly became gay (or at least bi). I am sorry to anyone that wished to see that, but the editor must abide by the desires of the author.
Dragon diplomacy is the best! Good work! It really made my day reading this :)
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And guess who made my day by making a comment
And yes, once one understand how it works it is awesome
Hellu, Azure! I've finished the reivew for your story! Hope you find it enlightening
That was a sweet/sad read.
I am loving the all so far I can't wait to see where the second part goes(no rush).
That was a cute and sweet chapter can't wait for part 2(no rush).
Yes i wonder why
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Right? These ponies have strange social standarts from dragon perspective
Im sure Big Softy will be a big hit wherever he goes, though Im worried about the Derpy airspace over Ponyville. That, and trying to get Pinkie to deal with Fluffy, as well as Pound and Pumpkin, would lead to Pinkie having to wear her Pyro Gear?
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Oh sure he will I am sure the Kirin will love him Though, Ponyville is actually not on the visit list, I am a bit afraid of writing the main 6 or other cannon characters in detail, most readers are very nitpicky about their cannon behaviour.
Though your idea of Pinky had to care for Fiery and the twins with a very protective Fluffy Kirin watching is something funny
What are you up to?
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Parents...
Ah yes, Black Death’s pet, he often engages in quite heavy petting with her, I’ve heard.
I never make these jokes, but this story is good enough (so far) to warrant it.
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Awesome I must remember that comment
And it often requested attention and beeing petted those days!
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Wow, the author asks for inspiration and instead gets a note from the editor criticizing their English. (Albeit in a friendly way)
I wonder how that must feel.
That ending scene was actually quite funny.
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Thank you
I have several questions about that last scene.
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Then go ahead :)
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The biggest one I’ve got is: why did Black Death do this?
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For Fiery primary, he knows it can't go on with Fluffies family as it is. Therefore, he must do something and since they more or less told they are willing to show good will and want him to feel as part of the family as well, he do the dragon thing and ' claims' them. Think of it like treasure, it is no longer only Fluffies family, now it is his to a degree too.
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OK.
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Something else you wanna know?
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Not really.
Black Death is an interesting perspective. I do enjoy how different his viewpoint on things is.
Good chapter overall, looking forward to more.
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Thank you for your kind comment
This chapter explains the cross-breed mating. That’s nice.
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I am happy you found something you like
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Then perhaps you should at that that scene in at some point.