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Deep, deep below the city of Canterlot, the facility has slept for hundreds of years. There was never a reason for someone to go there. But now, Twilight has agreed to take Celestia's place as the one who shall carry things out should the worst happen. And that means she must be made aware of the procedures she will need to go through. It's for the good of Equestria, and the whole world, after all.

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heavenlyRaid

heavenlyRaid #1 · Mar 24th, 2019 · 6 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

What?

Reykan

Reykan #2 · Mar 24th, 2019 · 10 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

eh, I’d call it an abuse of vagueness in order to facilitate more weight. Like everything was so vague in the first part of the chapter it could have been any number of things. I’ve never been a fan of the deja-vu predestination stuff, to be honest.

Faraday

Faraday #3 · Mar 25th, 2019 · 1 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

I don't understand. It left me with a feeling like when I finish reading a convoluted SCP article, only without the comprehension of what happened.
I honestly can't tell whether I am just not smart enough to get the full picture or if the picture wasn't developed enough to fully communicate its premise.

Neece

Neece #4 · Mar 25th, 2019 · 2 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

Eh, too vague. The general gist of it is easy enough to get, but in the end it's rather simple and too filled with intentional unknown (that in the end is there for naught) to be truly enjoyable.

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SCP is right feeling for it. Basically, there's something that Celestia (and Twilight, once presented to) consider so dangerous that erasing reality itself and starting anew is a viable and more acceptable option. But Celestia can't make herself do it, she's to afraid of the reasonability. So Twilight's the one to take such responsibility upon herself.

And then she does it, but in the end it's actually a horrible idea and tries to tell herself, in the remade universe, not to go. And with that the story reveals that it's all a useless closed loop based on Celestia's fears of, well, something. And said loop is going on for likely untold eons.

Twiggles not being able to look at initials was really forcing it, though.

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #5 · Mar 25th, 2019 · 3 · · Peace of ]V[ ][ ]\[ ]] ·

Do not go

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #6 · Apr 3rd, 2019 · 2 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

Fascinating... but really, all of those computational resources and they couldn't figure out a simple acrostic?

Aside from that, great portrayal of a chronoclasm and how Equestria was made. Thank you for it.

Rabe

Rabe #7 · Apr 3rd, 2019 · 1 · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

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Maybe they never had a choice. Twilight saw them not figuring it out, Twilight didn't make them figure it out. Maybe things were always predetermined to go that way and that way only. After all, Twilight can't warn herself if she doesn't go.

Speckle

Speckle #8 · Feb 8th, 2022 · · · ]\[ ][ ]-[ ][ ]_ ·

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I agree: a part of me thinks that it's a haunting piece while the other says that Twilight could've DEFINITELY figured it out with everything presented to her. Unless this is a Feeling Pinkie Keen-type incident, of course