Nice chapter!

I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! THIS WAS SO GOOD!!

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Thank you

To be honest most of your storys have great , but the pacing is always to fast. I get that these are meant to be 3 to maybe 4 chapter stories, but I legit believe you could make amazing stories if you took the time to build these chapters and characters up.

good work keep it up cant wait for the end

Glad to see this is still alive, hope to see more.

I was waiting for this to update and you did not disappoint. Well not that you ever disappoint but keep up the good work.

I am SO glad that this was updated. I am SO looking forward to more.

Continuation!

love it, With their problems now reveal and worked out, things get's better for the Dazzlings.

I am loving this! I would've read this sooner, but I was busy with my own fanfics. It's not easy combining My Little Pony with franchises such as Brightburn, Sonic, Assassin's Creed, etc. The wait was definitely worth it. Brony on, my friend!

oh boy... i know i've been rushin' you a bit but i really wanna see how the final chapter plays out here!

Good chapter