First like boyo! Good Stuff!

well this is new, was not expecting this

I have been waiting for this for a while now and so far you are not disappointing.

We all been waiting for a waifu story of the Dazzelings even with EQG case closed series, Good start on the story Israel

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lucky !!!!! In a few words tell use how you felt?!!?!??

He supported your decision and offered to help you get a house for me while I worked during the weekends, delivering meals to nearby neighborhoods.

Shouldn't be using "me" or "I"

The camera man zoomed over to your band and the crowd cheered loudly as you all made it to the stage. You grabbed your instruments and played a familiar song .

This motherfucka did something that NFL couldn't do. Payed respects to Stephen Hillenburg by playing Sweet Victory at the Super Bowl. You deserve a salute my friend!

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If we want something done right, we gotta do it ourselves.

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You right

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It's Subaru

"I don't travel whores who abandon their families," which shocked your mom and thought she had kept her affair a secret.

I think you meant yo but a 'with' after 'travel'?

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Was thinking that too.

tbh I felt like the Stephen Hillenburg tribute - while relevant and yeah the Super Bowl did do him dirty - was kinda shoehorned in

other than that the story's fine so far, although this

"Because I'm not turning my back on anyone... unlike someone in my family who did," you said, clenching your fist, thinking about your mother.

felt a little on the nose

OH BOY...

YES! THE DAZZLINGS!

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fixed

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Yay

So far, so good! This was definitely worth the wait, so keep up the good work! Also, I was half expecting the link to take me to that song. Excellent choice my friend!

R.I.P. Stephen Hillenburg.
May you jellyfish in heaven.

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what can I say? There was still a bit of a Spongebob fanboy inside me and I wanted to show it. Also, this is payback for the NFL screwing up bigtime during the Super Bowl

Curious to see where this goes.

-Ru

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NFL: *Plays Sicko Mode at the Halftime show instead of Sweet Victory*

Everyone else including Israel Yabuki: media1.tenor.com/images/d4c53f19ecd00f4bc09a536ecfb0cd2e/tenor.gif?itemid=11912873

Great beginning

I'm loving this so far!

I really can’t wait to see this story continue soon.

Not trying to be rude, but do you know when this story will continue?

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eventually

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Thank you for answering my question.

I have another question, is there any chance the main character will visit his mom in this story?

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I might consider the idea

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Thank you.

More please

i want this story finished so bad, i wanna see the dazzlings' happy ending

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Alright, I'll try. But after that, I gotta get my other stories finished

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thx.

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*sigh* I'm going as fast as I can

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Take all the time you need I know you're worried about laying your readers down but take your time please don't worry that's how most writers stop writing because they get annoyed not trying to be rude to the other guy just putting that out there

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thanks for understanding

Any chance we could see a vinyl scratch story ? She's my waifu

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I've said this over and over again, I'll get her eventually. But since my laptop is on the fritz and I'm trying to keep my physical health in check, it's gonna be a while!

This story sounds like it going to be interesting from start to finish can't wait to see what going to happen next.
P.S I love your work keep it up bro

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Surprised this hasn't been updated.

Look, Israel. I know you get this a lot, but are you going to continue this?

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For the last time, yes!

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Ok, thanks! That is the last time I will ask, I promise!

hee continuaras con este fic... o lo abandonaste?
hee will you continue with this fic ... or did you abandon it?

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I already said I'm continuing. I don't wanna have to repeat myself

Aria would look good with a muffin top.

They all turned to face you and removed their hoods from their faces. The girl on your left had blue hair with indigo stripes and had it done in a ponytail. She had magenta eyes and beautiful light blue skin. The girl on the right had light purple skin with matching dark purple hair with turqoise stripes. Her hair was done in pigtails, and it matched her eyes in color. As for the one in the middle, she had long, poofy, orange hair and light yellow skin and had magenta eyes just like the blue girl. Although, you kinda wondered how these girls were able to fit their hoods over their heads with hairdews like that.

Hairdos is the correct spelling, I think.