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KonaPona


Cupcakes!

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Twist is in her last year of middle school, and desperately wants it to end. Bullying, difficult assignments, and problems at home have placed her thoroughly under stress. Gloomy and isolated, her self-hatred leads her to sacrifices her health in order to meet the demands of her strict parents and teachers without outside assistance, or friends, for that matter.

Surely the start of summer will be a relief- but Twist's relief disappears when she finds out she has to attend a summer camp as a counsellor in training. There, she will have to confront the things that have been troubling her, and come to terms with her situation regardless of choice.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Interesting beginning, I’m curious to see how’s this going to continue as I might be familiar with something similar you have been through. You do well with descriptions and your grammar is solid and from what I can see, the story flows nicely :pinkiesmile:

This looks... interesting...

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The second chapter is finally out. Sorry this took me so long... I know it's been months.

Fairly nice chapter (in terms of writing and execution, not stress-wracked Twist) with really good work on the atmosphere :twilightsmile:

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Thank you. I'm sorry again for taking so long with this, and never replying to your original comment. I really appreciate the feedback, though! It means a lot that people like my work enough for that.

The next chapter won't take nearly a year to be released this time. :twilightsheepish:

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No need to apologize, really. And you are welcome! :twilightsmile:

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