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I commission and write many questionable things.

Comments ( 22 )

human/anthro untaged?

9615277
Fixed, I must’ve missed that :p

This story needs to be longer but hot as hell :)

Twilight and Button Mash? That's... very random. :rainbowderp:

I'm curious if twilight cast a spell on button

It took me like 1 minute to get the reference because in that minute I went back in time tohigh school and middle school messing with my calculator just to spell this.

quite nice!.. one more for a round 2 of this.

Thank you guys so much for all the support!

You should be thanking Twilight's bra that's been certified by Canada Mortgage and Housing Corporation for maximum support.

9616679
Not gonna lie, that made me chuckle. I like a good boob pun. :P

DumbDog
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Some of the ugliest cover art I've ever seen, no kap.

Was this story inspired by another?

9618129
I don't believe I was, but I wouldn't be surprised if there was a fic similar to this posted at an earlier time. It's a very simple scenario ;p

9618259
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/393594/male-chemistry

A very simple concept if even the cover art is copied. I'm not the author, but there seem to be a few too many similarities for them to just be coincidences.

9618351
I can assure you that's it's a complete coincidence. I didn't know about that fic before hand ;p

Comment posted by ActivistVictor deleted May 27th, 2019

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