Insta fave. I love this ship and i love its stories

Gaaaayyyyyy

Oh, and, like, cute 'n' stuff. :P Really like how the garden gave them something to ~bond over~ and how you can see even from the beginning what they're seeing in each other, why it makes sense. They click!

Also, super neat to see how your style translates to something more upbeat; it's still that distinctly strong character writing, just in a different sort of setting and with a different tone.

I'm up for more if you are

You actually did it.

Link is certainly not related. Nope.

nice and fluffy so far. You're a hecka cool writer, y'know? Keep it up! It looks like you're enjoying the journey.

I wonder if Wallflower Blush would faint halfway through Pink Floyd's The Wall.

And of *course* Wallflower wears a "plain white bra" while Sunset's lingerie is smoking hawt as hell. Nice contrast you've got going here. Especially since Sunset strikes me as more turned on than Wallflower, despite the wrappings.

I like the pace you set for yourself in this version of the chapter. Wallflower does Wallflower things as soon as they enter Sunset's apartment. Which is appropriate, methinks.

And then, ew, boobs.

You've got something nice and giggly going on here. I like how clean and consensual and *adorbs* it is. Keep it up. F'naaa.

-SS&E

Whoa! This is cute!.

Here's hoping for a second chapter

Good story, love it

They don't have to hold back anymore.

GAH, IT'S SO CUTE!

Flutters danced through her entire body,

I just... I can't help but imagine tons of miniature Fluttershys dancing around, frolicking with critters, and giggling with merriment. Because of the capitalization, I can't help it. XD

I'm down for snuggle-smut!

Okay, I'm more than convinced. You're too awesome not to follow. Keep up the storytelling asskickery!

This is so cute!

Okay, this is the adorable sexy fluff I was here for. This is really nice. Thank you for taking the time to show these two being sweet together before things got heated. I like how you have them bounce off each other.

This is lovely and snuggly and fluffy. Just gonna finish it before--

If enough people are interested, I'll add another chapter delving into smuttier territory. If not, I'll do it anyway. I don't play by the rules, y'all.

--okay, that's quality sass. Immediate upvote.

This is so cute, I'm gonna diiiiiie D:

tfw no hugging partner
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“Uhm... Sunset, do you wanna, y’know, like, maybe go out with m-me...?”

A stupid grin settled on Sunset’s face, and she shivered as another flutter ran through her. “Yes,” she said. “Yes I do.”

Of course they'd do this all out of order. Who needs formalities when you're just enjoying each other, after all? Very in-character, I'd say.

“Some flowers need a little help to grow,” Wallflower said, stepping back to admire her work. “With a little support, they’re all the more beautiful for it.”

They just need something tall and strong attached to them. That's all.

“Where to?” Wallflower’s voice was barely above a whisper.

Yes, yes, good. Good. This is some wholesome connection and desire.

Sunset grinned. “Sounds like you want me to see.”

The desire from both of them is palpable.

Good start so far. The gardening scene, as well as Sunset admiring Wallflower's gardening expertise, really set up their chemistry well. What you have so far is very sensual and sweet. Nice touch with realistic things, like Wallflower having trouble getting her shirt off. I know the story continues into smuttier stuff, but cutting it off here is a nice tease, as well as a hint towards the undercurrent to come.

In other words, nice.