Strings of Trouble & Sweet Shocker

A harp player with a rodeo clown.
A "sweets maker" with a weather pony.
Should be fun!

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Break-off · 15th May 2019 · 1,420 words
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To Explore the Blossoming Emotions · 4th May 2022 · 1,001 words
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Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #1 · Jun 4th, 2022 · · · Break-off ·

“No!” Lyra held BonBon in the embrace of a sibling. “He’s done nothing of the sort!” She let her go, and then continued to explain. “ I’ve just… had passing thoughts about stallions in our area. Y’know, the… saucy kind. I was a bit confused about it, so I went to Princess Cadence and… she explained it for me. I was confusing what I had with you for love, when clearly I wasn’t attracted to you. It explains a lot, doesn’t it? Why I didn’t ever kiss you, or any of that?”

Ouch that kind of hurts but if the love was not there and it's not and it happens

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #2 · Jun 4th, 2022 · · · Break-off ·

Well this is a very interesting start of a story and what a way to drop the ball as well for Lyra to say something about their relationship is not really working out or they just don't feel it but it doesn't mean they can't be friends and it can be very awkward but I still think it can still work out so it looks like they're trying to find herself another relationship with somebody Lyra was going to Appaloosa to see if there was anybody she can see and she bumped into trouble shoes and apparently she really got it really bad and meanwhile Bonbon is trying to find her soulmate as well and wanted to ask Caden about any love relationship advice but until she bumped into thunderlane and she looks like she got hit really badly as well well it looks like both of them found somebody let's see how the relationship works out between those guys

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #3 · Jun 4th, 2022 · · · To Explore the Blossoming Emotions ·

Well it looks like things are going very smoothly for both of them and it looks like they are really liking their guys hopefully whatever the dates go I really hope this story does continue on I would like to see how this will go

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