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Fleur de Lis. The Queen of Canterlot's high rise social circles.
Or at least she was until Fancypants breaks up with her.
Now, she has to find a job!
What will our pink maned protagonist do?

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 10 )
#1 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

holy shit. this was amazing!!:pinkiehappy:
take him!! take spike! you deserve him as a reward for this amazing story! :moustache:

This chapter is countably infinite?

I love this story! I think you made Fleur mature very realistically and it was just plain cute to read! Just one thing: the formatting seems a bit off at parts, though it might just be my connection.

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Eh, there's only one chapter that encompasses the entirety of the story...so relative to any point in the story, we can take the closed set of points that make up the story to have a cardinality that is countably infinite and...
Ok, so I'm making this up as I go. The real reason is because there was only one chapter, and Chapter One of a one chapter story just seemed wrong so I went with the first thing that came to mind.
That there are always some integer number of humans in the universe only makes things more fitting, if we take the possible number of human experiences as being the image of a mapping from the set of points in the story, where a point in the story is some -
Yeah, still making this up as I go.

amazing story, one of my favs now

Sweet:pinkiehappy:

No idea wha telse to say!:rainbowlaugh:

Very, very nice story. In fact it's one of my new favorite stories to read. However there is one grave, terrible problem that kinda ruins the awesome mood of this fic: I hear tell of this mysterious thing known as the "Favorite Button," it's sole purpose I believe is to put this on my favorites list. However I'm unable to find this rare button. So sadly, this must go un-favorited for the moment. Now I must go find my sherpa, I believe with his guidance I might be able to find it.

#8 · Jan 3rd, 2012 · · ·

Amazing story. A very enjoyable read. Do you think you'll write another one like this? :D :heart:

Honestly, I consider this to be one of my worse pieces.
However, since ponies seem to enjoy it, I'll see what I can put together.

This was the first pony story I ever read, and I still love it very much :twilightsmile: It's definitely one of my favorites overall.

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