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Merchant being kind??? Must have been having a very good day, or feeling something for the poor guy in the wrong body.
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Or he's just bored and decided, "fuck it, why not", we are talking about a void dweller (which are pretty much gods and goddesses) with infinite time to kill
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Right on the money. I'm impressed. No one's noticed till now, but I'm trying to portray the Merchant as someone similar to Discord or Q from Star Trek. Someone who adds things into the equation for his own amusement.
1. I don't think that's exactly how nobodies are created.
2. I didn't see any of Kairi's reasons when she yelling at Celestia. I can't agree with Kairi if there's nothing pointed out and I just feel like protecting Celestia from Kairi's hostility.
3. Concerning number 2; why is Celestia scared of Kairi? I don't see any reason for her to fear her.
4. This is definitely going to ruin important events.
5. Also what happen to Master Aqua? If you don't want to say it here then maybe in PM.
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I'll address your comments in order:
1) In canon, you'd be correct, but this is an alternate universe, hence it's written to fit the universe I created.
2) This is supposed to be a self-insert of sorts. This is the sort of thing that would really piss me off. Admittedly, Kairi did go a little overboard here, but its somewhat minor in the long run.
3) I'm gonna assume that you aren't familiar with the idea of Killing Intent (KI). Its an idea that I pulled from Naruto, among other anime, where the user projects their violent intentions to kill or maim as a sort of pressure. People react to it in various ways, and because of Celestia's pacifistic nature, the KI overwhelmed her to the point of cowering in fear.
4) I don't see how, considering this is not following the show's events, especially since Kairi will be changing a lot of things.
5) Master Aqua's fine, she's just hanging out in the Land of Departure. We'll be going there maybe a little after Discord's arrival into the story. Not only that, Aqua is also a Displaced that holds ties to Kairi.