Alright, finally. I've been eagerly waiting your Spike x Ember x Sweetie Bell story. Though I got to say, this definitely isn't what I envisioned it being about. Either way, this is off to a interesting start and I cant wait to read what happens next.

Well, I can say my interest is piqued. That said, I noticed a few errors, one even made me cringe

Ok is it wrong that I want the infamous Dr. Karl Gebhardt to have some fun with Flim, Flam, and Jet Set. Then again that may be to merciful for those three. Great job on creating such scum villains that I cannot wait to see get some sweet justice. Note I put who in spoiler tags in case people could be offended and I will not provide a link for the same reason, this guy was pure evil.

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Dr. Joseph Megele might be overkill.

Uh, you sure about leaving off that dark tag?

Ooh, this is interesting. Tracked!

It seems that there's a political mess somewhere down the line. Nasty stuff, those. And as Spike says, just the fact that a sister of one of the Elements of Harmony went through this… it'll be a scandal for the ages.

… Reminds me of Ariana ― Ariana Dumbledore, that is.

“Hey,” said the dragoness suddenly, causing Spike’s head to jerk. It was hard for him not to think how attractive she was, even through he knew this wasn’t the time to be thinking of such things! “Don’t let them see me like this,” she said, her voice almost begging.

Anyone want to bet on the chances of her attempting to escape as soon as Spike unbinds her?

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Fixed

Allrighty, lets watch how this will progresses... And how badly KARMA will hit the scumbags in this one.

Also, nice to hear that Bluey and Bati are doing fine in the background.

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Dont want to say too much, but if you have followed my writing then you know karma can get nasty... even if it won't happen right away

You, sir, got my like, and my attention. I'll be sure to track this story.

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Sure have. And waiting for KARMA to happen is part of the entertainment your stories provide.

Well, in a setting I'm working on, this sort of thing would get the internal security forces on your ass faster than lightspeed (any attempt to do this in a world where the sensor density is literally 'yes' would be found out as it happens)... if SolForce's Silencers and their bodyguards don't get you first.

If you somehow managed to rebuff the Silencers and their retinue with an entire fleet as support?

"This is SolForce Command, we're not loosing any more soldiers. All forces prepare for orbital ion cannon strike."

[island ceases to exist]

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But overkill is underrated. How about both of them have fun with those three?

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No no. Gebhardt is enough.

Yes, after being teased its here.

So far, damn swallowed bait and hock. So much going on in the first chapter and I can barely wait for the next chapter.

Also, I hope when karma hit the baddies, it hit like a truck with 120mph.

You shouldn't happen to have a bigger version of (or a source for) the cover art by any chance?

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Nice chapter can't wait for more.