A short comedy starring my OC's and Chrysalis
Avatar done by @befishprod on twitter, check her out! I write comedy things, occasionally they're good.
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XD HA! You had some great lines in here, great job on the comedy! The plot could use more complexity and there are a lot of minor punctuation errors, but I see a lot of talent here! Keep it up!
Alright, good story. Comedy was on point. If you have more stories, I'll check them out.