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Midday Shine


Fell in love with the show by total accident, watching the episodes at random. Shy and quiet around strangers, much more fun when among friends – that's about everything you need to know about me.

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This story is a sequel to Breakfast


The mall. A huge area filled with shops of all kinds. Finding the perfect birthday gift for your own sister, whom you've known your whole life, should be easy in such a place… right?

Yeah, sure. As long as your sister's name isn't Celestia.

Luckily, the mall is also a great place to have fun, even if your big sister has gone to a shop you don't like. Who knows, maybe you'll get to make a star out of her thanks to a guy you met by accident and who claims to be a part of a rock band? They all wear ripped clothes anyway, so there's nothing to worry about, right?

Yeah… sure. As long as your vice principal, feared by pretty much the entire school, doesn't suddenly materialize next to you and yell at you.

But wait. Why does she seem different than at school? Kind of… nicer? What's going on?


This was supposed to be a quick, short comedy (Pinkie Promise!), but ended up as a two-part, somewhat humorous, more than 30 pages long (in Word, at least) slice of life I've written for over a year.

Was created simultaneously with the Polish version (PM me if you're interested), so if you catch any mistakes I've missed, tell me.

A huge thank you to Lyokoheros for the preread.

Enjoy!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

This was well done. I really like the way you handled Luna in this chapter. :twilightsmile:

This was a really excellent story. I quite enjoyed reading it! :pinkiesmile:

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Because Miss Detention is best Vice-Principal Luna! :pinkiehappy:

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Yes, she's fun to write. Strict when she has to, laid back (and a teeny tiny bit childish) when she can. Add some warmth into the mix and you've got the eponymous "Auntie Detention". :raritywink:

I really enjoyed this story, liked the interactions between Vice-Principal Luna and Sweetie Bell.

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Well, thanks a lot! :twilightsmile: They were fun to write.

hi Would you mind if, I used the idea of Pinkie throwing Someone a surprise party, then a campfire at sweet apple acres for my ocs birthday party in my fanfiction. id make it as different as I can possibly can,apart from The fact that it was a surprise party and then campfire???

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Sure, go ahead. I'm pretty sure I'm not the first person in the world to do this either in fiction, or in real life. :pinkiesmile:

By the way: would you mind telling me what you think about the story itself? :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Agrestecreations deleted Jul 22nd, 2021

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Oh, I see. Not really my cup of tea, but I wish you good luck. :pinkiesmile: Though I actually wanted to know your opinion about this story. Y'know, the one you originally commented on. :pinkiecrazy:

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Just realized what you actually said:facehoof:, I really enjoyed to read your Fanfiction and it became one of my favourite Equestria Girls fanfics on this site. I like how it shows a side to Vice principal Luna that we never see. The way she calmed down the Toddler and allowed the students to throw her sister a surprise party always puts a smile on my face when reading this.:pinkiehappy:

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Hahah, mistakes happen. :derpytongue2: Don't worry about it. I'm glad that you liked the story. Have you also checked out the latest one, Sealed With a Kiss? :twilightsmile:

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