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Midday Shine

Fell in love with the show by total accident, watching the episodes at random. Shy and quiet around strangers, much more fun when among friends – that's about everything you need to know about me.


This story is a sequel to Breakfast

The mall. A huge area filled with shops of all kinds. Finding the perfect birthday gift for your own sister, whom you've known your whole life, should be easy in such a place… right?

Yeah, sure. As long as your sister's name isn't Celestia.

Luckily, the mall is also a great place to have fun, even if your big sister has gone to a shop you don't like. Who knows, maybe you'll get to make a star out of her thanks to a guy you met by accident and who claims to be a part of a rock band? They all wear ripped clothes anyway, so there's nothing to worry about, right?

Yeah… sure. As long as your vice principal, feared by pretty much the entire school, doesn't suddenly materialize next to you and yell at you.

But wait. Why does she seem different than at school? Kind of… nicer? What's going on?

This was supposed to be a quick, short comedy (Pinkie Promise!), but ended up as a two-part, somewhat humorous, more than 30 pages long (in Word, at least) slice of life I've written for over a year.

Was created simultaneously with the Polish version (PM me if you're interested), so if you catch any mistakes I've missed, tell me.

A huge thank you to Lyokoheros for the preread.


Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 4 )

This was well done. I really like the way you handled Luna in this chapter. :twilightsmile:

This was a really excellent story. I quite enjoyed reading it! :pinkiesmile:

Because Miss Detention is best Vice-Principal Luna! :pinkiehappy:

Yes, she's fun to write. Strict when she has to, laid back (and a teeny tiny bit childish) when she can. Add some warmth into the mix and you've got the eponymous "Auntie Detention". :raritywink:

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