*<>* oh nu commitment SKRT..

Nice! Talk and hug that shit out!

A minor stump in the road of a theory of mine. Good work as always. Again, complex moral obligations setting themselves on that marked path are really pointing out all the red flags.

Anon's character is a bit out of touch, intentional?
By this I mean he's getting too sappy too quick. Maybe this will be counteracted by a fight or some form of heartbreak.

Starlight is the most confusing. Her aura was at first very very tsundere like. Now its revealed that she did have feelings for him after they had begun the trip. The confusion centers around what she thinks of Anon in the long run, Sunburst still being a major plot loop still here. What if Sunburst finds out? What if Anon finds out? What if they never say anything? What would Starlight do? A childhood crush and love interest so significant should not be ignored, Anon has been around maybe half that time and yet his charming debonair is sweeping Starlight off her hooves.

Too many twists here. Some welcome and others predicted. Very few I have declined, yet know I cannot. This in all sense is pretty intriguing, keep working fren.

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Thank you for your insightful comment as always.

Now I'm really curious about this theory of yours...

And don't worry, we'll see Sunburst soon.

I like that Anon's fumbling with his words. He struck me as not being that emotional so it'd make sense that he'd have problems verbalizing his emotions. It actually made it that much sweeter when he's consoling Starlight.

This was a really good chapter. New ground broken for the two and the conversation interesting

I absolutely need more! This is sweet, cute, and goshdarn INTERESTING!

Commitment... Anon might pull it off...