Why has nopony heard a song from Celestia? It's time for Luna to try and change that.
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Lol, I knew that this story was going to have Celestia suck at singing, but that Royal Canterlot Voice part XD
XD Vinyl's Single Tear. XD I died laughing. I'm literally laughing so hard my head feels like it's -pulsing-. :O
1045674 Glad you liked it. 1046163 is your pulsing head perhaps making a "wub wub wub" sound?
Royal Canterlot Voice jokes are really boring already -_-
1046987 I am sorry for boring you with an old joke. I would also like to thank you for being the first to comment negatively on my fics. I assume that yours is that second thumb down. If you have a valid reason to not like my fic, I am glad to hear it, for it may help me in the future. You have my admiration for leaving your explanation.
Firebird, pls. Celestia sings beautifully.
2134939 I had hoped someone would remember, and of course it's you.
1046987 This might be a weird thing to comment on but I really want to say you're an awesome person for actually explaining why you dislike a fic. so few bother to doso and it's nice to see not everyone does.
Personally I got a kick out of it, I didn't see the twist to it coming and I found it very amusing. The RCV is definitely a heavily used trope but I felt it fit nicely here.
Lol, that punchline.
LOL, so in the end nopony really got to hear Tia sing at all. lol
It's a cute story, but it could really use some polishing.
That's a sentence fragment, and I think you meant to connect it to the following sentence.
It would actually be hypenated as "oxygen-deprived", and your spelling is off just a tiny bit on "emission".
Since Celestia's sentence is continuing in the next chunk of dialogue, you should have a comma there instead of a period.
Don't forget that when a character is being directly addressed, you always need a comma before the name.
"Take the parade we have coming up, for example."
In this case, "clever" is sort of a title (like William the Conqueror or Alexander the Great), so it should be capitalized when it's connected to her name like this.
You get the idea. With just a little work, you can have this close to flawless, I think.
3507112 Thank you. Your comment has saved me from displaying embarrassing mistakes in an otherwise entertaining story. Each of them have been changed, and any further error spotting that you do will be similarly fixed.