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ZombieBrony22


Started writing at 11, still going on hard at 17.

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Shoutout to FourShadow’s incredible story for inspiration for this story.

For the last 3 years, the students and even some of the staff at Canterlot High have been tormented by the nefarious Rainbooms, with powers, to boot. Now the only thing standing in their way of world domination is Pip, formally known as Pipsqueak, who was bitten by a radioactive spider and has gained meta-human abilities as a result, Flash Sentry, a broken soul with nothing left to lose, and three new students who want to rise up to terror.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 8 )

Nice this.

We need more stories about EqG Pip!

bahatumay #2 · 1 week ago · · · Pip ·

Spider-Pip, Spider-Pip
Does whatever a Spider-Pip does

Ok when the Rainbooms and Sunset are finally exposed and such. Please please Please Celestia is fired, for gross incompetence in handling all this.
Or made to apologize in a humiliating way for failing so badly.

This story really sounds a lot like "A Shattered Rainbow Rock" but with a Spider-Man crossover attached to it. :rainbowhuh:

Also, I know it's a superhero/high-school story and all that, but the Rainbooms' bullying goes waaaaay over the top. That scope of outrageous antics - from their powers to stuff like dye packs, animal attacks just cross the line into farce... especially this whole bit with Celestia saying that the Rainbooms have clean records. Um, what?

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Actually I was greatly inspired by that concept of an alternate universe where the roles were reversed and yes, I have read Shattered Rainbow Rock before writing this. I’m going to be honest, I don’t even know where Spider-Man came in, I just got the idea planted in my head one day and it never left. I wanted to see if it stuck with people, and if you don’t like the idea that’s okay— trust me, I know how random it is.

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Ah, I see then. Well, in that case, I might suggest you put some kind of credit to Shattered Rainbow Rock in the story somewhere, if for no other reason than just out of politeness to the writer of that work. It's good to give credit for inspiration.

And yeah, I don't know if I'll look at the rest of this story yet. But I will say that I do appreciate your politeness about what I said.

9450686
I’ll keep that in mind, thank you for your input.

Very great story!Cant wait for next chapter!

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