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AstralMouse


Ponies ponies ponies ponies ponies. And changelings too.

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Comments ( 12 )

... oh well I'm gonna go cry now bye.

At once beautiful and heartbreaking. A masterpiece.:pinkiesmile:

Why must you hit me with the feels? :raritycry:

Very sad and bittersweet.

You spin a lovely yarn, and it was proudly entered to my Group.

This hit hard. Both of my grandmothers had strokes and came out of the experience less lucid, to say nothing of what happened to one of my grandfathers. Seeing this through the eyes of the sufferer...

You certainly conveyed the experience with skill. Painfully, excellently done.

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Thank you, and I'm sorry to hear about your grandparents. I have (luckily) so far had no personal experience with it, but I tried to research and write this carefully so as to make it realistic, especially given the subject. Learning about it was quite sad, but it's something that deserves awareness, especially because it is surprisingly common.

This was the most bittersweet, most original take on this issue. I nearly cried. Okay, I did cry. You did a good job.

Gavier #8 · 1 week ago · · ·

...Ouch

Grimm #10 · 1 week ago · · ·

This was good. Really good. It was a bold move choosing to write from this perspective when it would have been so easy to go from Pinkie's, but you absolutely nailed it, and between this and Twenty-Eight Boulders (or was it twenty-seven?) you've got a real knack for changing your voice to match 'non-standard' character perspectives. Great job.

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That's... extremely high praise coming from a writer like you. I'm kinda speechless. I really poured my heart into this one, and to see that it paid off is just... a relief is putting it lightly. Thank you.

Ouch my heart it hurts so.

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