A young Pegasus colt who has been abused all his life tries his best to take care of and make life easier and fun for his sisters by shielding them from the same abuse he suffers on a daily basis. He tries his best to keep everything under wraps so as not alert foal services. When his sisters start going to school in their new town and they make friends with a couple of important ponies, everything may change. But for better or worse remains to be seen.
Usage of alcohol will not be shown, merely mentioned.
Chapters (11)
Interesting start
The scary thing is this is quite accurate too some real life child abuse cases I've seen first hand. I hope it's a good ending in the end though!
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Well, i'm going to try and keep this story as authentic and realistic as possible. As for how it is going to end, you will just have to wait and see
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Well I know one thing, child abusers are totally despised in prison! But kids like Shadow are among the people (or ponies) I respect the most in this world despite his one mistake.
NIce work!
You might want to try getting someone to draw you a cover. Basically, there are people who hate the pony maker flash game, they might judge the story because of it.
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Yeah I know but I don't know anyone who can do that. I also won't be able to commission a cover this time. Any suggestions?
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I think there's a group you can try asking in.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/295/art-for-fanfiction
I wonder where this is going
Always something creepy about kids arriving at school and acting like that (wing thing) too me.
I hope the Situation improves soon
The scary thing is this stuff happens.
I really like this chapter! I’m looking forward to Chapter 4.
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Working on it right now
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Yay!
Looks good!
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Thanks
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You're welcome! And thanks for the watch, may I ask why?
I was waiting awhile to comment to see how the story progress and i have to say i love it keep it up
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Will do.
So you made Vinyl Scoot's adoptive mother, cleaver seeing how she's busy as a musician she can't always be there for her but it's always implied she's a decent pony.
Silver shield mark, symbolizing being a guardian.
Great Work as always! I am delighted to see no dislikes. And Rainbow, i could Think of a stallion for her
See it From the bright side, pinkie pie can give you a wonderful date.
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True, but I probably won't write too much of Pinkie. I do like her as a character, its just hard to figure out what she would say or do. She's just too happy-go-lucky for me most of the time.
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You and me both
Well, that date went swell, didn't it? And nice work telling Diamond off, Clear Breeze!
I do like how the story is progressing
Really glad I found your story when I did, before it got lost in my Feed. Really like the story and characters. Can't wait for the next chapter/chapters and just know that I will be reading quietly, and waiting quietly for each next chapter! I don't comment much, sorry! Anyway love this story and keep up the amazing work!
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Thanks.
I'm glad you didn't miss it. I will definitely finish this story. I even have a few more planned after it.
I'm also very glad you liked it. I will do my best to get more chapters out soon.
What the fuck is wrong with your Mother
I can only wish her death
However to make you smile, imagine her having therapy sessions
Therapist: so, how have we done this week
Mother: I told my son/Daughter to kill themslesves.
Therapist: WHAT
Silence
Therapist: HAVE YOU NO SANITY YOU EXCUSE OF A HUMAN? DONT ANSWER THAT, I KNOW YOU DON’T SO PREPARE FOR DEATH BITCH
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That actually got me to chuckle a bit.
It was just a bit harder this time seeing as it was my mother that said and meant it, not a friend.
But all we can do is continue on.
Sorry to hear that.
I find its a nice Gesture by Granny to Help them and its also nice that Shadow helps scoots. Personally, i like the idea of her Father being a Royal Guard
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I already have Scootaloo's backstory planned out and it will be revealed at some point. Not saying anything else about it, that would be spoilers. When it is revealed I don't think it would be too obvious or expected, but maybe that's just me.
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Its okay. I just spoke out my likeing. And nice to See that you don't have any dislikes so far
I didn’t realize that mare was the mom until she was fighting her son
Very nice! They all can finally Relax, they have earned it.
And Shadow can be glad Applejack didn't get it wrong with scoots. No offense
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Oops, I thought I made that clear in previous chapters. Seems I still have to work on clarity
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That’s okay. It just sounded like Pinkie cause I know Shadow never really liked her.
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It's not that he doesn't like Pinkie, he actually likes her a lot, he is just scared of her perceptiveness. She knows everypony and throws a welcome party for everypony new in town, so to avoid the attention she or a party will bring he tries to stay as far from her as possible.
Nice idea with Rumble, given Scoots has Shadow and Rumble's shipped with Scoots by many.
And somewhat funny, I gt this update on midnight and Shadow's a batpony
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Shadow would have a bit of a deeper than one would expect of him. Not as deep as Big Mac's but I would say in between Soarin and Big Mac.
I’m just confused about one thing...
How does a story so good only have 26 likes??
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My 1st time writing anything I felt good enough about to post. I put a lot of myself into this story so hearing you say that feels amazing. Thank you very much.
Well, guess they finally figured it out...
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Eeyup. I'll try to not just do an info dump next chapter, but be aware that there will be a lot of info revealed.
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Okay
Nice Work and don't worry, Shadow, we are all here for you. Can't see any mistakes here.
I guess Salt is like alcohol?
I sense scoots will be conflicted but neither of the Three will Blame her.
And sorry about the last Comment, mistook it with a batpony OC that had the same name as him and a simliar back Story.
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No worries.
Yeah in the show ponies get drunk on salt.
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Ah, Yes, i Remember. Though what's worse, that or cider?