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Creamy Crumb is relatively content with her life; things are largely stress-free. There are occasional threats to her home-land of Equestria, but they've not affected her life for more than the duration of the issue. That is, of course, until one fateful day.
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Inside Bolt’s head: Buck.
Eh, I’d assume that a bit more went into the first (fake) wedding than simply “I pronounce you husband and wife.” I’d suggest, if not going into detail about a basic ceremony, then at least mentioning how everyone listened to them exchange their vows.
has potential
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;)
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Yeah, I was just going off the transcript. I don't really have much knowledge in weddings and such. Thanks for the feedback!
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I'm pleased to know you think so.
I like. I shall wait for next chapter now.
Can't wait to see more of this, I like it already!
All right guys, I'm sorry for not posting for so long, I've been busy and sad. I'll try to get the next chapter up today!
OOooooohhh, It would be actually awesome if her Boyfriend was a Changeling and maybe has a completely different personality after changing back into a changeling, forcing them to get used to each other again.
That and I kind of hope this is a changeling version where the changelings can have their own families and I like it if the Quee only needs a partner for a new queens or really special changelings, that she can create normal changelings only with the collected love.
If I remember it right (who is who), then I have to say I like it, now I only hope Bolt was her Boyfriend all along
Oh? You think your lover was real?
Aren’t you in for a surprise.
Good to see you’re back. I hope to see more of this story in the future. It’s these types of stories that interest me the most. Keep up the great work!
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Glad you're enjoying it! Sorry I was gone for so long. I've had a lot on my plate, and after I finished all that stuff I was struck with the flu. Haven't really been in the best mood for writing until today!
Like I said, you’re going to be in for a surprise when you meet again. Worst case scenario? She calls the guards immediately. Best case, she knocks you out in order to find the real Bolt.
Really liking this. Lets hope for the best for him!
She means that ya boned a changling, now friggin deal with it!
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Well that's one way of putting it
They are going to meet halfway arent they?
Let's face it, you knew this was coming when you wrote the chapter title.
Inside Bolt’s head: Buck.
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You are correct!
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This is getting good. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Glad you think so!
Somehow I like this kind of changeling stories.
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Glad you do!
*inside Bolt’s and Chrysalis’s head*
Buck.
Are you rewriting this?
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yes
A prior what? Year? Month? Week? Day? Hour? Minute? Second? Millisecond?
....Nanosecond?
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Fixed. Thanks champ
How heavy is the death tag?
An interesting rewrite. Looking forward to seeing where this version takes things.
Will there be more? I'd look forward to seeing it.
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Maybe some day.
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I gotta read it again. I can't remember what it was about. Oh right. It's been a a year and a month since I read this.