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A little bit out there for my tastes, and if it's a clopfic, i'd have preferred it just go all the way and detail the clop and focus on it. But all in all, thumbs up
*<>* this was rushed .. Like 70 in a 35 zone
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I appreciate the feedback. This wasn't intended to be a clopfic though, rather just using sex for the overall depraved theme without glorifying it. Maybe I could have added a bit more detail though.
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Sorry it felt that way. Guess there's too much going on for a short fic. I'll try to aim for a longer format if I do a stories like this in the future.
Nice little fic, but I agree it's pretty rushed. Thought it was going to be a bad end, glad you didn't go that route!
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Thanks! And yeah, I didn't want the story to be too depressing so that's why I chose a different ending. Will try to work on the pacing for future stories.
You just raped Twilight with malicious intentions of making her your slave, relished her suffering, and tried to slowly break her down and enjoyed every second of it, how come you get more of an equal chance Sombra? HM?! People like Sombra disgust me in real life.
Also Spike and Starlight both took a trip to Manehattan, any special reasons for that?
Speaking of those two they were probably worried about Twilight I really hope they don’t feel guilty for what Sombra did, given their nature of blaming themselves for other ponies misdoings. Great story. Poor Twilight she did not deserve such suffering no one does.