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Damn .... cut throat .... twilight didnt even question it or hesitate. They went straight for the 1000 year banishment .... they only knew that nightmare moon was banished and would return in 1000 years due to the elements being used against her ....her being purified was revealed after celestia hugged her sister and told them ...so yes they went straight for the banishment.... cut throat. Whelp looks like with gamers mind he has free reign to use the alicorn amulet and that manifestation book spike gave rarity. Plus with his knowledge he knows right where they are.
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That... wasn't what I was going for... I tried to make the story line up with the show in this part, but also have a huge moment when Led was betrayed. I guess it was kinda rushed, so I could move onto the major parts of the story. In the next few chapters, we are going to have some characters and playthroughs of other series. SO I guess there's that to look forward to.
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Hymn .... hes allready strong enough to take on celestia now .... he ports back in ...sleep spells or teleports the elements back to ponyvile then curb stomps celestia for being stupid. The elements truthfully are worse then shagoraths wabberjack that they effect things randomly... or in sombras case don't work at all.
Should use this as an opportunity to change her name to suit her more powerful status.
I'd go with Catalyst.
Heaven or Hell!
Duel 2!
LET'S ROCK!!!
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?
Wow... I raise my top hat, good Sir/Ma'am, I am completely flabbergasted from this plot twist in a very positive way while a thin string of saddness and shock is slowly making it's way through my mind.
Congratulations, you did an excellent job on this chapter.
Smoke will not be happy with Twilight. To more or less go 180 on her own sister without event asking if she was "ok" before blasting away. And when Zeppy tells what happened,,,,, it will probably not be pretty.
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thank you for the suggestion, I was planning on giving her a new name along side her current name.
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already on it.
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Thank you, this is a major plot point I have been planning since I came up with this story. I was originally going to have her become an alicorn, but that would have been way to predictable. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Yes, but that won't be for a little bit.
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True, but not in this Equestria, the idea here is that they work based on how evil or chaotic they are. So Discord, Sombra, or other (at the time) irredeemable villains would be trapped in stone, while those like Luna, or Trixie would be purified.
Oh ho ho what an unfortunate turn of events
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I suggested it as a conclusion she'd likely reach herself, with how she's already caused changes to how the show plays, she's become a catalyst for change.
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Smart. I'll have to use that.
Hmmmm..... interesting.
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What's interesting.
No really I want to know, I really like hearing the readers opinions.
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Having Led absorb the Nightmare. Granted, the betryal felt rushed as heck, I still think LEd should hav tried to say SOMETHING. I mean, Celestia and Luna's thoughts were very reasonable. So, it's up to Led to communicate that he's fine, he wasn't corrupted. Plus, I'm sure if he clarified that the Nightmare was targeting Twilight, they'd be much more worried.
However, looking forward, i'll be interesting if Led absorbed Nightmare Moon's powers.
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I personality don't care if an character becomes an Alicorn, unless the story is good, said character done something incredible (sacrificing himself and surviving it etc.) or the character is understandable with a complex back story.
.....well fuck.
I can fully say I did NOT see that coming and that's SAYING something!
I would think Celestia and Luna would have noticed something off about the entire event like say HER NOT CACKLING LIKE A MAD PONY! but then again this is Celestia we are talking about and we all know she sits on her Flank eating cake most of the time.
I don't blame Twilight here, it was a Knee-jerk reaction, rather then an act of betrayal and I hope Zeppy realizes that before she does something she can't fix.
I do however blame Celestia, she let her anger take over logical thinking. She did something that is unforgivable and all further consequences and blood is on her Hoofs.
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Not to mention that before this they had a sort of mother daughter relationship. I hoped you enjoyed that little twist, as well as the fight scene.
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Oh I did, brought out that feeling of Mixed Universe combat. To me it felt like I was watching a Force User mixing the Force with Avatars bending ability's and Equestria's Magic XD
I can't wait to see her new stat sheet! Also is she part Umbrum now?
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The fight scene in this chapter was actually inspired in part by the later parts of Avatar and Korra. I'm trying to go for a fast paced and partially strategical form of combat here.
Edit: No, she is not part Umbra, but she is no longer a unicorn.
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Knew it, the later parts of Avatar is where the shows combat really shined.
Really? The way you described Zeppy reminded me of Sombra in a way....Well Sombra mixed with a Alicorn. So I figured Zeppy was at least PART Umbrum.
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How, if anything her color scheme is closer to that of Whis from Dragon Ball Super. The idea is for her to appear more angelic.
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Whoops, I read that as Black rather then Silver Grey! My bad. Now I wonder what her Sub tribe is going to be?
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Shhhh, it's a secret.
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But I want to know NOOOOOOW!!
Damn it Pinkie, what have I told you about using my computer when I am away!
Hehehe Sorry~
Sorry about that, Pinkie got a hold of my Keyboard again -_-
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She does that to me too. Especially when I'm writing a story.
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Worse I can't find my Duct tape, I am starting to think she hid all of them -_-
Im interested in this one now. Kinda sad it's so short tho
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ok only one i was wrong on was perception then
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how often will you be updating this? or is it just whenever?
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I am currently focusing on this, so expect weekly or bi-weekly updates. That will change when I continue my other story I'm currently working on. Then it'll kind of just be when I have time.
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cool
That was very eloquent explanation of her role, wasn't it? Honestly, like she have any idea who mane 6 are or what trails of what episode Led meant. That's too meta for her. Our of all character's in the show only Pinky and Discord would understand Led's command.
Oh, and thank you for keeping Nighty around. Even if kind of.
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She is under Led's complete control, so she would also know the things she knows? Idk suspension of disbelief.
HAHAHAHAHAAAAHA
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I was going to bring up the same thing, but I'm willing to go with it not being the words used in the order, but the intent behind them. It's already magic, why not double down?