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I love ponies herpdaderp

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Its winter and everypony is awaiting the holidays, execpt one rainbow colored mare.
this is a story in which those little ponies set of to cheer her up!

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Touching story and all, but CAPITALIZE NAMES! There were more errors in proper noun capitalization than in anything else in the story!

#2 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

lots of spelling error, also annoyed you didn't have sweetie also give scoot a gift (Sense she knew scootaloo longer.

Who fucking cares about grammar you grammar nazis it's a good goddamn fic :flutterrage:

#4 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

62943Boring,agrees with you on the spelling error:fluttershbad::ajbemused::rainbowderp:

62954
Lol thanks :rainbowlaugh:
62943
eh, it wouldnt have worked out with all the CMC in it.

#7 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

Paragraphs.
Without them, this fic made me :derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

This was really great. I loved the story, but it was difficult to read with all of the spelling and grammatical errors. I loved the characterization you gave the ponies, and the background you gave Rainbow Dash...Even if it was a bit tragic.:applecry::heart::pinkiehappy:

extremely hard to read major grammar and spelling errors, good try at a heart warming fic tho, definitely needs paragraphs

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