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Rainbow Dash dreams.

She dreams of stars. And then, when she is visited by the Princess of the Night, she dreams of other things, things that Luna assures her will provide answers and solve her problems. If only they weren't so painful to relive.

If only Dash knew what Luna was trying to help her with in the first place.

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Fly me to the moon, let me play among the stars

This was really good! I love it! Great job! :twilightsmile:

AKA Luna the Shipper.

>SFW Grimm
>Well characterized Luna
>Rad dream magic

I can’t upvote this enough.

aaaaa i need to know what happened!
Anyway i really enjoyed this story, very well written. Into the favorites it goes.

Who else clicked because they recognized the song?

As I clicked on this story all I could do was start singing the damn song, Perfect! :pinkiehappy:

Really great imagery here in that dream sequence, and a great story overall!

Oh my. :3 This is delightful, and I can't help desiring more.

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...Let me see what Spring is like on Jupiter and Mars...

In other words, please be true, in other words, in other words,

I love you.

Ah, that was a beautiful little story. And I like how you've depicted Luna's dream walking, quite interesting.

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Fill my heart with song and let me sing forever more, you are all I long for, All I worship and adore

Let me see what spring is like on, jupiter and mars.
in other words.....please be truuuuue.
in other words, III love you.

love that song
ill read the story at some point

“No that’s not it,” said Luna. “That’s the physical side of it, but it’s not flying. The physics don’t make sense. There’s a magic to flight, one that you use every time you take off, every time you soar through the skies, with every sonic rainboom. Trying to explain that to a pony who can’t fly is like trying to explain the colour green to a pony who can’t see it.”

So, the real Luna can't help every dreaming pony, but everypony can download the Luna App if they need to? :twilightsmile:

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Exactly! Except it comes pre-installed and you can't get rid of it... :applejackunsure:

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Perfect reaction.

A nice story with its little dark and happy moments. I liked it, good one and keep enjoying writing:twilightsmile:

The synopsis makes this story sound like it needs a sad tag.

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Don’t judge a story by its synopsis alone, maybe?

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Actually, I think they ended it perfectly.

Find someone who looks at you the way Rainbow Dash looks at Fluttershy. :rainbowkiss:

This was wonderful. I love the way the atmosphere shifted from uncertain melancholy to oh-so hopeful and... I guess comfortable is the right word? I also really love Rainbow's characterization--you made her insecure and defensive without making her seem childish, and she's so enjoyable to read when she's able to be honest and introspective.

I loved this. Good show, my dude.

This story had a twist I was not expecting and was very sweet! It was a bit hard to tell when RD was having a vision/dream vs being with Luna, but that kind of works, cause dreams can be like that. Overall, a very interesting and great story.

This one sat on my read later list way too long. I'm glad I got to read this one. It's not exciting, but it's loaded with insight. Very good job indeed!

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