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Time Agent pony


Time agent is the name, time travel and writing Fimfictions is the game

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This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: Time, Space and Justice


Twilight has been having dreams, dreams that involve hearing the voice of Midnight Sparkle calling to her for help. After the dreams get in the way of her and the Champion's hero duties, Twilight decides to seek help from some of the greatest minds in world. But after getting no where Twilight looks to the world's magic users for a solution and once she discovers the source of the dreams, Twilight will find out that to rescue Midnight Sparkle she must confront her inner darkness.

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Comments ( 5 )

Great job on the start of this story. The action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I especially liked the trouble Twilight has been having with her nightmares and how she didn't want to worry her friends because they all already have enough on their plate (despite the fact that her lack of sleep caused her to have trouble in school AND in hero work). And, to be fair, Twilight IS technically right about the problem being in her head AND how she DOES need to go this one alone as, at present, the others can only provide moral support.

Anyway, considering the stakes in the previous three stories, I suppose it DOES make sense to dial this one back to something more personal.

I'm definitely going to be looking forward to seeing what comes next.

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You're quite welcome.

This looks soo awesome

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