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My name's Maggie & I'm in love with a bacon horse.


Based in the world of Equestria, Sunset Shimmer is the adopted daughter of Princess Celestia, and her only personal student. Until now.


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I have to say, this is absolutely beautiful. I can't help but admire your writing, and how wonderfully you manage to convey everything. From the get-go, we're able to get a good sense of Twilight and Sunset's (still blossoming) dynamic, and for a first chapter, it definitely is a stellar hook.

Every time you talk about this story, I can't help but get invested, and I'm so excited to see how this plays out!

oh my goodness!! thank you so much!
I was a little worried about being cliche in describing character movements/expressions, but this really means so much!
I hope I can live up to expectations😋

AA I can't find my wig ,, okay but real talk though I'm just super excited to follow this story and read more about it aah thank u for your service & I can't wait for chapter 2 ... !!

So far, the story seems really promising and it definitely caught my attention. I look forward to the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

This sounds really good. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This is getting good. I can't wait to read more.

Bro, I am so excited about this. As a DIEHARD Sciset shipper.

I'm so excited to see how their relationship develops from this.

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