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Based in the world of Equestria, Sunset Shimmer is the adopted daughter of Princess Celestia, and her only personal student. Until now.
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I have to say, this is absolutely beautiful. I can't help but admire your writing, and how wonderfully you manage to convey everything. From the get-go, we're able to get a good sense of Twilight and Sunset's (still blossoming) dynamic, and for a first chapter, it definitely is a stellar hook.
Every time you talk about this story, I can't help but get invested, and I'm so excited to see how this plays out!
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oh my goodness!! thank you so much!
I was a little worried about being cliche in describing character movements/expressions, but this really means so much!
I hope I can live up to expectations😋
AA I can't find my wig ,, okay but real talk though I'm just super excited to follow this story and read more about it aah thank u for your service & I can't wait for chapter 2 ... !!
Great work.
This sounds really good. Keep up the good work.
Wow. This is getting good. I can't wait to read more.
Bro, I am so excited about this. As a DIEHARD Sciset shipper.
I'm so excited to see how their relationship develops from this.
Pretty good start
Hang on. Are these humans or not?
You mentioned Celestia had hands but then she suddenly have wings aswell
This story is absolutely amazing so far, despite it being short still I just want more of the story, Its just so damn good.
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Yes, she can have wings as a human.
Oh my GODS I would love to read more of this!
Has it been abandoned? T-T
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I hope not. This is really good!