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Galaxy Swril


Just another girl who reads peoples stories as well as writes original's and does art

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This story is a sequel to Earth to Soarin


Rainbow Dash and Soarin have been dating for three months. Summer vacation is over and they go back to Wonderbolt HQ. They notice their two friends Spitfire and Thunderlane acting more stranger around each other than before. Rainbow Dash and Soarin decide to investigate whats happening between each other until they discover that Spitfire and Thunderlane like each other, but just don't know it yet. Soarin comes up with an idea that he and Rainbow Dash will make a cute little documentary about Spitfire and Thunderlane and get them together.

Authors notes- 05/07/2019: So this story involves some more ships than SoarDash, like later in the story. Chapter 1: Mondays... is just an introduction so far before we get all that juicy stuff we all want to hear.

WARNING: swearing, sexual content, dirty flirting, no sexual interaction with other characters, probably the fluff gets bigger...

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Comments ( 9 )

9715193
If you made this artwork I will credit you because I just got this from the internet not knowing where it came from :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Galaxy Swril deleted Jul 5th, 2019

9715196 Nono! Not mine, but an adorable pic nonetheless.

9715199
ohh ok then :twilightblush: sozz I was just checking (awkward lol)

Oh ho.ho.hooo. They are so in for it now,:rainbowlaugh: Spitfire didn't even made reservations at that Bar, :trixieshiftright: they are Being bribed them bigger problem. You better think fast Spitfire or they will be disappointed faces.:pinkiehappy: (Can't wait to see they're reaction's though heehehe :rainbowdetermined2:)

Well... this has a nice storyline, and a lot of potential. :twilightsmile: BUT! This story needs a lot of editing. Perhaps see if you can read this story with a different mindset. Say, look for repeating words (at the beginning - nuzzle), phrases that are a bit dragged out (the whole 'is it just because its monday or are you going through a thing') so on so forth.

"Yea well, your social media and Soarin's tells us a different story about all these 'dates'." Fleetfoot replied.

Also... this was confusing. Ponies have social media now?
Not trying to be mean.. just trying to help... :unsuresweetie:

I was told that this story was good, it was good but I am not the SoarinDash kind of person.

Why is it cancelled? This story had a lot of potential :fluttercry:

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