Voice actor, artist, author. I can do it.
Luna awakens in the aftermath of the great war in a robotic body that she is unfamiliar with. after being shown what has become of Equestria, She resolves to bring back order and save Equestria's people from themselves.
Let's hope there is even anything left to save.
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...hmm, good start.good
This looks cool I wanna see more of this.
Ir's also a good concept I wanna see more of
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Thanks ! :)
Is there any parts you didn't like? I'm looking to see if I can make improvements as well as see what kind of reception it gets by readers.
Kinda trying to feel out my own style.
No not really any parts I don't like.
Also the set up is good.
We'll. See if it holds up if it continues.
Also it's cool.
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Thanks again for the input! I appreciate it.
Hope you'll enjoy whats to come. I'm fleshing out a complete story line right now.
This is good stuff.
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Agreed
I would like to see more!
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I'm glad you like it! I plan to release more so stay tuned.
hummmm... Luna as a Sentinel. Interesting. Oh, the things you can so with this. Someone (thing) powerful enough... and possibly armed well enough... to wreak havoc all over the place... but run by the spirit of the Princess of the Night... Who only wants to protect Her ponies, and help them live and 'do better'.
The conflict between smashing those raiders, and her desire to have captured them to help them learn from their mistake, is a good example of the 'conflict' I am speaking of. L.U.N.A. will have more and more such occurrences, and chances to learn how the Wasteland works... While having ever more chances to make changes of Her own.
Perhaps, she might even regain her magic... or use of magic... If Toggle can somehow get her hooves on Luna's horn (Last seen in FOE: or was it FOE:PH, as a set of bones overlaying someone's armor).
Keep up the good work, I'm liking this one.
the Frank Pony
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it was Fo:E were little pip finds her bone's and Bury's them.
This looks like it will be a very interesting story. I hope to see more in time.