I think I’m gonna call 911 right now

Traveling through this tale turned to a truly terrific time.

Just what we needed. Baby porn.

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Considering there has been fics of Shining Armor raping newborn Flurry to death and Iron Will doing the same to the Cake Twins, this honestly ain't that bad in comparison.

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Don't forget the fics with Night Light raping baby Twilight to death.

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Never saw those and I am glad.

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Also, Flurry is 8, so not baby. Hadn't read yet before making ym first reply.

2019 recipient of the “Roy Moore Literary Achievement Award”

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Doesn't make it much better lol.

*<>* this is one of the best tenti clop ive ever heard over my radio

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Negative comments like these, which offer nothing constructive or worthwhile, will lead to the users making them getting blocked by me from now on. If you can't be courteous, don't comment at all. I will not have this become another 'Sunburst's Flurried Heart' comment section.

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Glad you liked it!

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I agree wholeheartedly

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"911. What is the nature of the emergency?"

"There's a story about cartoon ponies that I'm not interested in reading."

"Oh my god! We'll send a squadron of story police to the internet immediately. Let me connect you with a victim's advocate so we can get you into counseling."

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Mmm, such a sweet and beautiful story :) I'm happy to see that you're still writing these kinds of stories!

9499996 Dude, too soon!

...don't you know that Mr. Gants, the person performing as Hitler, just recently died?

Good thing there's a good babyp0rn fic to clop to while I grieve.

*reads fic* Oooh...a tenti means a... yes. Indeed. Should have been obvious. I'm dumb.

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It's 999 in the UK, you dumb bong. I hope you got a license for that phone mate.

I will tell you something. Pedophilia is bad.

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I won't disagree, only it seems everyone agrees that written horse children getting (consensually) molested by tentacles is fine I guess. I honestly don't have high hopes for this generation.

Good story man/girl. I got off twice before I even finished the fic.

As someone who also writes filthy foalcon...

I approve of this, as it was written deliciously well, the scenes were nice, dialogue was good, and all in all, it was hot.

11/10, would read again, thanks for the fic OP.

hmmmmmm interesting

probably looking a bit to deep into this but didn’t the instructions of the spell say that any foal born from a tenti would be XX, then Flurry goes and has a colt? kind of a continuity issue there.

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It said the offspring would be of the XX genome's species, not it would be of the XX genome's gender.

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Glad you liked it!

In the main description

curious foal she is, wonders off into

wanders

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Ah, so it’s the same species as the caster, but still has a fifty fifty of being male or female. k, makes sense now.

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Glad you wrote it dude //finger guns
We need more decent Flurry content.

Also, from the downvote spam in this section, seems someone is a bit salty.
I am amused.

in her whole life then she was now

than

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Cadance

Not bad but the ending is quite subpar...
It's rushed and doesn't really add anything.
Personally not a real fan of teen pregnancy but as this is a commission I guess that the patron is.
Up to the point of the talk with Shining and Cadance the writing is nice and working well.

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Thanks, fixed them.

9501588 Yep, still a normal chance for the offspring to be male or female, but will always be a pony (or whatever species the mother is since, in my headcanon, the tenti can interbreed with any sentient, sapient creature).

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Glad you liked it!

9501711 Thanks, but yeah, I ran out of words and still went 600ish words over. No time for an elaborate after-scene since I used all the words on the basic story, but the commissioner requested 'breeding', so therefore that was the (rushed) result.

LOL that last line.

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Well, when you're limited to 6k words and know the detailed sex scene is going to take up the majority of them, you tend to gloss over the introductions and scene-setting. In porn, the woman doesn't tend to have a long, drawn-out conversation with the pizza boy before they get down and dirty after all. If I'd gone all-out on details on the summoning ritual and scene-setting, the sex scene would have been rushed instead. That said, yes, I know that the intro and outro were rushed as hell, and I still went nearly 600 words over.

Thing is, I was paid to write sex, not a deep, touching story (unless you consider Flurry being deeply touched internally, in which case I guess I succeeded in that aspect). Thank you for the advice though, and you can indeed expect to see more writing from me.

I Would like to see twilight sparkle get pregnant by the Tentacle
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Well, you could always commission it from me if you'd like to.

Thanks for enjoying this story!

Bah! All the haters don't know a good thing when they see it!
Anywho, brilliant fic, good sir!

why the tenti can comprehend even the very limited Equish that they do,

offensive spells thanks to her lessons from Sunburst, her Crystaller and magic tutor.

was deeply satisfying for her.

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It kind of serves them right considering that they should have gotten to the birds and bees talk as soon as they knew she was growing up.