A Lesson in Patience

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WhatDidIJustRead

WhatDidIJustRead #1 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 19 · ·

Scootaloo yelped in pain as Twilight smacked her in the back of the head with an open hoof before returning to her spot at the front of the room.

Oh good. If it was a closed hoof, it would have been abuse.

moviemaster8510

moviemaster8510 #2 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

9418624 Implying the story itself isn’t.

Starlight Glimmer1

Starlight Glimmer1 #3 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 5 · ·

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Did you even pay attention to what’s happening in the story?

Zaid ValRoa

Zaid ValRoa #4 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 1 · 1 ·

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This is the kind of story that is better enjoyed on an empathic level rather than actually analysed.

Aster Viridian

Aster Viridian #5 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 1 · 1 ·

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Win lol

Starlight Glimmer1

Starlight Glimmer1 #6 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Analysis has nothing to do with it.

Huk

Huk #7 · Jan 23rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Man, I know those are all trollfics but… even here that kind of ‘F-BOMB’ humor feels pretty low .

Seriously, if you really need to sexualize every story, at least use some nice innuendos! When you forcefully thrust all those limp-phrased f-bomb jokes on your reader, they may end up stuck in the annals of his mind. In the end, you’ll just have a bunch of pissed-off readers with the seed of anger clearly visible on their faces - and that’s not fun at all…

IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #8 · Jan 24th, 2019 · 3 · ·

"SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU STUPID ORANGE CHICKEN WINGED FUCKER!" screamed Twilight, lashing out a hoof. Scootaloo's world spun for a moment and the next thing she knew, she was flat on her back on the ground, her head ringing and vision blurry. She brought a hoof to her cheek and winced at the sting, and she tasted blood in her mouth. Scootaloo's eyes widened in realization. "You... you just hit me," she whispered, feeling something wet fall down her face.

... FBI OPEN UP!

SpikeCrosstie4077

SpikeCrosstie4077 #9 · Jan 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

“Daddy didn’t give attention, to the fact that mommy didn’t care”

-Pearl Jam

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #10 · Feb 5th, 2019 · · ·

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Can you open and close a hoof?

Commander Darklight

Commander Darklight #11 · Apr 25th, 2019 · · ·

Twilight's eyes widened and her gaze traveled wildly around the room. "Exactly, that's not sex. Now shut up you little fucker." Scootaloo yelped in pain as Twilight smacked her in the back of the head with an open hoof

ah the gibbs slap