On one eventful night in Equestria City, a big surprise is coming on the grand opening of The “F” Word. There would be food, fun and a fair amount of trouble. But it’s this trouble that gets Roy excited as he faces off against a duelist who is just as strong as one of the legends. Does he have a chance against one who wields potential, instead of victory?
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Hmm... Not... Bad but dialogue heavy and as for characterization not great? Like the characters are good but im not sure it counts to say 'this is Snips" give a reason for the character change and say that it works... But enough negatives i liked the interactions and the merging of real life and different places. Please keep up the good work!
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I appreciate it. Sorry if it's very late but let's just say that I'm not perfect. I wish I can improve.
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No worries! As long as you continue to write you will learn your own style and improve.