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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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Eric Reed was thinking about some of the girls back in his old, human world, wishing he could have a girlfriend. A human girlfriend. But before he knew it, Eric found himself having to deal with the affections of his suddenly overfriendly pony friends. Who may or may not take "no" for an answer. He's not into ponies like that, so this becomes really weird for him.

And things will only get weirder.

In the many months he's known them, none of his friends have ever once showed any real hints of a romantic interest in Eric. Why would they start doing it now...?



Like similar short stories I've wrote, and still writing, this story takes place after the events of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story, but this isn't really a sequel to it. You can enjoy this story without needing to read "A Giant Adventure to Equestria, but here's the link to it if you want to read it, and to learn about Eric's backstory.
http://www.fimfiction.net./story/427481/a-giant-adventure-to-equestria

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He should have married all of them ... I would :ajsmug:
Oh and you forgot about Trixie

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Lol but that lovable lord of Chaos would've ended his spell anyway before Fluttershy got back, so Eric was smart to not give in.

But I didn't really forget about Trixie. If this story did well, I was gonna make a sequel, so if I do, I'll need more mares to give Eric the love treatment. It did well enough to think about it.

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I think after marriage, it would be strange at first, but I think they would get used to it.

hunnn spit-fire, cheerise, sunset shimmer (visiting), tempest shadow and guida are good recommendations pro proximo cap xDD
 

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Because the events that happened in all my stories are, from a timeline standpoint, during Season 7 and before the movie, I don't think I can bring in Tempest.

EQG doesn't exist in "A Giant Adventure to Equestria", but I could still bring in Sunset, by saying that a sequel to this story contains a ret-con, allowing me to bring 'ol baconmane in. Even if I did have EQG "canon" in my 'Main" story, I could've wrote it in a way to keep it pretty much the same as it is now.

I'm writing these shorter stories as more or less self-contained stories that take place after it, so I could just say that only short stories with Sunset has the ret-con.

EDIT: I decided to just ret-con the "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story itself, so EQG is now canon, but the story didn't really change much.

"Oh, come on! Now I was getting the business from Twilight. Twilight! My big sister Twilight Sparkle! I mean, she's the Princess of Friendship! Or I guess she's the Princess of Forced Marriage right now. Who's gonna do it next? Starlight? Princess Celestia? Princess Luna? Princess Cadance? Derpy?!"

Derpy.

Eric must be gay.

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Nah, he's straight. He's one of those really odd bronies that doesn't think of ponies that way. He probably will sooner or later.

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Fixed it. thanks for catching that.

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Run from it, dread it, destiny still arrives

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I was just having some fun when I made that comment, but I wasn't truly serious with it.

"Yeah, I forgive you all. Let's....just not talk about this again, okay guys?"

Speaking of talking, one pony in particular didn't come to talk with Eric. ;] I wonder... was she out of town, or was someone not willing to put her through that? ;D

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I meant Fluttershy.

She didn't approach this guy w/ some "hot action". Like, at all. So I was thinking... was she conveniently out of town, or was Discord not willing to put her through that process?

I mean, her absence is quite telling.

Notably, that was written before I'd gotten to this part:

It would also explain why all this happened when Fluttershy was away visiting her parents, so she couldn't do it too...

- in which the "convenient timing" is explicitly called out, along with much the same suspicion.

"Well, don't you worry, Buggie. I don't like you like that...I love you like that!"

Classic sitcom humor, and it totally caught me off guard.

Cute story!

This has been ranked here

It was obviously Princess Cadence's doing. Discord knew what could happen if he had caused this (*slaps ponies*" These mares can fit so many satyrs inside them!"), and Cadence just wants to see her cute little sister-in-law wedded all happily ever after!

I haven't even read this and I'm just shocked about the main characters name because that's the exact name of my father

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That so? Someone in a comment from another of my stores with Eric Reed and they knew something with the same name too.

Discord totally crossed the line here. He outright caused Starlight to almost glimglam her little brother figure. Thankfully she didn’t force it upon him but GAH!

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Discord was keeping tabs on the situation, so if things started to go too far (i.e. Starlight successfully getting Eric in his bed and he couldn't/struggled get her off of him) then Discord would have stepped in and canceled his spell on the Mane 5. Even so, his plan, even if it went about as well as he thought it would and was done with good intentions, was in itself crossing the line.

Although in the case of Starlight, it could also be looked at as her getting a taste of her own medicine when it comes to mind-control-type spells, even if the Starlight in this story's timeline wouldn't do those types of spells anymore.

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Getting a taste of your own medicine does not justify being forced to almost sexually assault someone. That kind of trauma sticks with you.

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