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The Dark Wolf


This is the name I use to express my fetishes. And my platonic wam interest.

Comments ( 13 )

And don't expect me to start writing as often as I used to just cause I submitted two stories in such a short amount of time. One was one I inspired to do to sort of take baby steps back into writing, the other was almost like a request. I'm not saying I won't write any more after this, but I won't do it as often as I used to.

Pretty much everyone's reaction to this story, or any story you write: reactiongifs.us/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/puking_brian.gif
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9403724
Well, no one's forcing anyone to read stories that are tagged in the description as having disgusting fetish content in them. This story is only meant for those who either have the fetishes or find it funny, it's not meant to disgust or offend anyone who dislikes that kind of content, I expect them to just ignore it.

I wasn't sure if that's your reaction too or if you're just commenting on it cause a lot of my stories do get a lot of downvotes, but half of them are from people with the fetishes for low quality. (Seeing how many other stories about similar fetish fuel have less downvotes)

Yeah... I'm gonna skip this one. This isn't for me.

9403768
Well thanks for skipping and not reading something you know will disgust you.

Very sweet and playful.

9403944
If this stuff disgusts you so much then just ignore it. It isn't meant for you, and was not written with the intent to offend or disgust. I know and respect that a lot of people dislike this kind of thing and that's why I tag my stories correctly so such people can avoid them and read something else that they will like.

9403932
Thanks for the positive review.

Boring. Seems like you're just telling us what happened instead of showing us. Twilight needed to use the bathroom quite badly. OK. Cool. Show us. Don't just say how much she needed to use it. She's hopping in place, she's whimpering, she's trying to hold it back. But then she uses it. Ok, so that plot point didn't go anywhere. Immediately resolved. Nothing to be gained from saying how badly she needed to use it and then her instantly using it. Sadly, it seems like a lot of the story follows that same structure which feels just a little dull.

9404186
It was just one of the "filler" moments, but as I was saving the wetting for the end and desperation doesn't interest me if it doesn't end in a wetting, I wasn't inspired to put much focus on it. It was also supposed to be a bit of foreshadowing to the wetting at the end.

I was trying to rush the non-fetish scenes less, I'd rush them more in other stories cause I'd be in a hurry to get to the point.

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