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The Young 6 hears the terrible news that silverstream is gonna die because she has a terrible disease because she has to much excitement and too much shout of happiness and she has no energy or health of an excitement hippogriff. What would the young 6 react??

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Good heavens this is a mess. Bad grammer, OOC behaviour, what else can I say?

Evictus Prodigy.

It's not that bad, but it's getting there. Sheesh, why do so many authors try to write something edgy as their first story?

A better question, why do so many authors suck at it?

Frankly I think it's because they don't bother to develop an understanding of the characters they write for, before attempting to write. They don't understand the inner workings of a character and what makes them tick.

I tried the Young Six once, and I'm not sure how good a job I did.

Personally, no matter how hard I try, no matter how many sources I read or watch, I can never write characters. I can make them, but I can't write them.

Can we get a F in the chat for her?

Well, we can definitely get an F for grammar...

You savage. I like to think of it as progressive

It's progressing right into the wood chipper.

I often have a similar problem.

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