Comments ( 16 )

How revolting!

I mean, red lighting? Really?

The rest was fine.

Flash as a beta fuccboi instead of a Brad?

... I must investigate further.

So do you guys think this fic was full of pink dresses before ID edited it?

Is this a Tropic Thunder reference?

Daaaaaaaaayum.

What's next, Pinkie Pie forcing Flash to make Squat Cobbler videos?

Enjoyable first steps into a smuttier world! I'm hoping to see more in this line from you!

Based and fempilled.

I liked it!

The only problem I had was that Sunset was not friends with her friends. It is possible for a female to be dominant with out being a bitch to everyone, even if they are to their sub.

The one thing I don't get is Sunset being that pissed off about Dash. Other than that, that was great.

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She doesn't even have to be a bitch to he sub to be dominant.

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You are right, but some subs like the cruel dom thing, so I can see that.

Liked this a lot. No one can do total fucking cunt like Sunset Shimmer. And it's good to see some vicious femdom without Sunset being futa. Although, somewhere in an alternate universe, Flash is having his throat pumped full right now...

She looked over. "What?" It came out like a dry fetus.

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