Six years have passed since a pandemic transformed a quarter of the population of the United States into ponies. Magic has advanced far in that time, but its formerly human users will soon find that they have advanced too quickly and recklessly.
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I know this is six years later and things change, but so many questions.
so much to think about, so many ways this story can go. so many questions.
yep this is going to be a awesome ride.
I'm sorry. Telling me that they're expensive isn't going to any more interested in eating them.
Does Jessie and Robby's insult match count as throwing racial slurs at one another?
Seems like even if she's fangirling over Wild Growth, that there are still too many repeats of the name without some variation. Could use this paragraph to give the reader some more actual things Wild Growth has done setting up her arrival and why she's such a huge deal that people are trying to kill her.
It's curious that she's dedicating time to learning latin with the setting and her limited time, having already expressed displeasure at how long it took to process things through reading. Wouldn't Spanish be more useful so her brother didn't have that over her and that she seems to have a circle of family who use it?
This section feels like it might have a little more emotional hook if Wild is worried more about her mother's condition before she gets into whether or not the magic test worked, or how she's a wild party mare.
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The Latin part comes down to science and math nerd. She is focused on what she feels is useful to her goals and has to have a language class. Being able to communicate with others she sees as less useful than understanding Latin terms in science.
Well I wonder how many foals Wild Growth has if she has had at least one unplanned pregnancy? I get the feeling that this is going to be getting dark if they are trying to force changes in which tribe you are or are forcing the change.
Aaaaand we're off! This is going to be a very interesting turn of events and I can’t wait to see where things go!
This sounds awesome
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You said it. I gotta read this when I have time.
This is an excellent start to the story. While I have a bunch of questions, I'm sure that they'll be answered later.
It's a good first chapter, but I'm not sure whether Megan's dreamwalk happened while she was a pony, or after she was turned back into a human. Maybe you could be a little more explicit on this point?
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I'll make an edit to clarify, but it happened while a pony. She was a pony when they knocked her out and she went into a dreamwalk while in that form. She appeared in the dream realm as a human though.
Edit: small paragraph added after Megan asks about the Dreamwardens.
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From the talk Number gave her, this is the first time.
I'm more curious about what the tatooing and Yinyu's Blessing mean, and what caused the peer pressure. Because on the surface that sounds like racism is alive and well even among the ponies Sunset created to be in sync with one another. Which in turn makes me wonder how the Shimmerists are responding to all of this.
This story is good so far, though there's some parts I have to personally trudge through, as it makes me feel a way, which is what art does so good job.
A rant is below, no need to read it.
Arg. I do hate it when stories turn characters into sluts. It just makes them seem hollow and shallow, I guess I just hate people who're like that. They treat other people as a means to an pathetic end, nothing more. I also do not understand why these stories try to make these people to be any kind of morally good. They trying to argue its a good thing that you actually do sleep whoever you want if you have the ability? So it'd be totally okay if a famous male actor came to town and over a week slept with all these women who were probable looking for something more than a one night stand with some douche bag who just happens to have a lot of money, it's basically that guy and all those women agreeing that all the any of the males in said town weren't worth their time or effort.
Bah, I just do not like anything about those kinds of people.
The ETS made most of the night ponies mares, because they're more likely to be afraid? Because women are inherently more afraid and brittle than men, who are almost never afraid? That's both incredibly mysoginistic and panders to toxic masculinity.
Because of that, out of desperation, they turn to lesbianism? Some people call that fetish fuel. Others prefere the power of friendship. Not everything has to involve sex and romance.
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There's no sex tag on this story. Nor does sex take place at any point in the story, or even implied taking place in the story.
just trying to clear something up, is this the same Wild Growth from Aftermath? or is it a different pony? i remember the Wildy from Aftermath being very confrontational and distrusting after what her parents did after her transformation
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The Wildy from Aftermath is a different pony, short for Wildflower. This Wild Growth was mentioned in passing in Aftermath as a pony of incredible power, but never appeared.
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I wonder what twilight sparkle or other equestrians think about human shimmerists .