• Member Since 29th Jan, 2014
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Nicole Sunstone


Heehee! Hi! I'm just your ordinary mare who enjoys a good story or two~ Mostly I write stories for my lovely Feather Dancer, but sometimes I'm willing to share with you guys. ;)

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A brown, muscular steer stood, planting his hooves in the dirt. Apple Bloom chewed the grass in her mouth and swallowed, captivated by the steer’s presence.

Um, just for clarification: a steer is a castrated bull, usually done before it reaches maturity.  While it still has a penis, it cannot "do the deed" and usually shows no interest in it.

Should have made scootaloo the chicken

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Oh, but that would be too easy!


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Ah! Thanks for the clarification. So it would just be a bull then?

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I believe so.  Looking forward to seeing where this story goes; I'm a big fan of TF-themed erotica. :twilightsmile:

Tek

Looking forward to where this is going.

My only concern is that your using a pig as one of the transformations and those are only raised for meat, so it could have a dark path to end up on. I would have probably used a sheep instead. It would fit with what you have done Sweetie was following Rarity's life plan for her like a sheep and she grows and gets a new outfit (coat) every season.

Are you to make the new character yet?

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Pigs are also used to find truffles, so it doesn't have to be dark. Also, breeders.

Tek

A very nice chapter, I admit to wondering how far the transformation is going to go. Will it stop at anthro or will they end up going full animal. Of course there is also the question of whether instincts will take over or there minds will transforming along with their bodies. I think Bloom not making any note of her speech changing is a good sign that some form of mental aspect could be in play.

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You'll just have to wait and see! Sorry for the really long wait!

Seems like another crazy adventure is awaiting us. I just hope this magic muddle can be fixed before too much damage is done.

Welp, this got interesting in a hurry, to say the nothing of AJ's arguably questionable non-reaction, lol. See you all next year!

Tek

Great new chapter and story progression.

Glad to see this story isn't dead in the water.

Looking forward to the next chapter whenever it appears :derpyderp1:

Comment posted by Da Beak deleted Jan 14th, 2023

ooh, I love that ending. I do hope this continues someday.

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