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Zael


Just your friendly neighborhood Eldritch horror. If you want to play with me, just search for Zael - SilverSpoon on Steam!

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This story is a sequel to Sadness


After "Sadness" events, Sunset is visiting some places in Equestria, while thinking about what happened on the other side of the mirror. And while Twilight tries to figure out how to fix all this mess and the Rainbooms face the consequences of their acting, a fourth party enters the scene.
What will happen? And who's trying to reach out to Sunset?

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 18 )

With what I assume to be Luna and Celestia it should be Dost thou as opposed to do thou, and AJ should be apathetic as opposed to apathic.

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I'm gonna fix the apathic to apathetic as soon as I get to my pc.
On the other issue, are they really Celestia and Luna? I don't really want to sell the mystery characters out so soon, so I have to make some changes.

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One speaks with some old syntax and there are few who would, and even fewer who that one would speak in such a flippant manner with. You could probably obfuscate their identities by making it so we don’t know what the person on the other end of the line says.

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Well, I didn't really want to reveal them so soon, but it will be soon enough.
I didn't really think about it when I wrote that part, and I rewrote that a couple of times. Well, they would reveal themselves in a couple of chapters though.

Well the last part was unexpected.

Flee like the sun itself is after you! Because that is literally the case!

I'm wondering if Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna will be dishing out punishments tot he students who sent in secrets? This may help quell some of the rage and anger in the student body.

At least report them to their parents who can hash some harsh punishments to them.
thou i do expect a brawl or two between some students.

Also hoping to see a bit more on the CMC, how they handling screwing themselves over and their families, are they still friends, will they be banned from seeing each other to often or they split up?
How they went from not spending enough time to destroying what bonds they had with their sisters.

better to be late and have a chapter fully developed than rush it and half-ass it as a result. take your time.

Well... once Celestia hears what's been happening to Sunset recently, there's gonna be trouble. So I'mm gonna go stock up on supplies, and then head for my bomb shelter. See you once the worst of the fallout has settled. :pinkiecrazy:

Love Sunset’s reaction when the other pony shows up.

evertime I read this it breaks my heart to know I can only like it once.

Rather sure they wouldn't keep saying "codename" before each codename, it got rather distracting.

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Well, in various moments of history (even today in some cases) people tended to add an adjective to the name. I think about the French revolution, when before saying the surname, they added "citizen" (e.g. Citizen Robespierre, Citizen Danton), or in the middle ages and in the XVII-XVIII centuries when they always added the noble grade (e.g. Duke Wellington, Lord Nelson). They also did it in Rome: e.g. Senator Catilina, Senator Cicero, Consul Caesar, Princeps Augustus, Dictator Camillus, when they had to speak in public or in the Senate.

Since the bar (and Roam itself) is based on Rome, I used the word "codename" to avoid using latin words like "hospes" (male guest) or "hospita" (female guest), or "adventor" (customer).

Code name Janus. The two faced God of Roman Myth. Amusing that that is the most subtle of all Codenames introduced.

Sorry about the job situation, hope the next one is a better fit for ya!

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