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The Redlight of Canterlot

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Jan 6th, 2019 · · · Chapter one: Sun is up, secrets kept. ·

Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

MidnaMagic

MidnaMagic #2 · Jan 6th, 2019 · · · Chapter one: Sun is up, secrets kept. ·

Yes. I have two lined up where silver dominates.
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jakesteel12

jakesteel12 #3 · Jan 6th, 2019 · · · Chapter two: Judging eyes and chains of blood ·

Good Chapter. Id like to see how Amber deals with Feathers husband. Also your transitions are a bit too quick. I recommend just bit more descriptive with each character For Example i think Feather husband could introduce like this Walking through door to her sisters home Amber felt a shiver from her friend. Feather used to cold of this once happy home sees the cause of all her sadness. There sitting on the couch once a proud Buck with high paying job in the Canterlot police department he was demoted when he got jealous of a new rookie.Oak was his name He was build like big mac and his antlers made the most proud unicorns jealous. His body still tight with muscle for chase criminals. his Hazel eyes looked down on Feather with shame but a bit of anger. Or something like that.