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Comment posted by WDGaster deleted Jun 26th, 2019
Comment posted by WDGaster deleted Jun 26th, 2019

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Concept and creation are needed together for something to be palatable. You need to get a proofreader if you can’t navigate the language by yourself.

A TIP:
Looks do not use the term 'monster' to say a different race of dragon, use guild term, clan or house, example: House of the Dragon Skeletons or Clan of the dragon skeletons or guild of the skeleton dragons, it makes it possible to invoke a ancestral skeleton in feral form or anthro that the characteristic of the clan or house.

Do not be lazy by names, your OC name (name of your nick is meaningless) and Spike's Name (in the Twilight story of that name) searches for the name of dragon or warrior.

And it creates jealousies for Twilight, about this new brother of Spike.

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Thx for the tip this is just my first story

I like it and have what that is supposed to be at the end.

Nice, could use a correction here and there but nice nonetheless

Anyone who favorited this story I’m sorry I’m not a very good author nah jk I’m a failure as an author I can’t think of anymore scenarios or anything so this story is cancelled if anyone wants to continue it for me I don’t mind

Finally managed to read this after finding it a few years ago(I think).

Man, its pretty interesting and I wished it got to continue.
Especially since this was made(I think) a couple of months before I joined the MLP fandom.


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Really hope someday you could decide to revive this honestly.

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