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Nobodyslament


I am a brony. I like warhammer. I play vidya games. I read frequently. Guess what? I also hate talking about myself.

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Each of these have been a treat. Can't wait for the next one. :heart:

Wondering when/if we will ever find out what happened to Celestia.

Probably unpopular opinion but I'm sorta hoping eventually he does go back and get a true happy ending, obviously I don't want him to just pretend nothing happened, but I hope he gets something.

I'm curious to know what the rest of equestria must think now they know it wasn't him. I can just picture over the years he's been out there that there have been articles in newspapers and books all vilifying him as the beast that killed their princess only to find out that he was innocent all along.

.....Isn't Celestia more or less the avatar of the sun? Wouldn't that mean that so long as the sun exists then so does Celestia? So even if she is killed then her connection to the sun will "Respawn" her at some point in the Future?

It would be interesting if that was the case.

Well it'll be interesting to see what happens next, whenever it happens, either way these are great!

I'm disappointed in the guys' reaction to Rainbow's appearance. While it is well-developed that he's losing some of his resentment at them by reminiscing of his good memories before ending in ponyland, I still feel this is off - at least Fluttershy tried to defend him albeit in vain. Rainbow? She turned her back on him like the others, so why should he care about her? Memories notwithstanding this whole chapter seem off to me.

Other than that criticism, good chapter - and I cannot wait to read more about how things turn out for him when the others show up.:moustache:

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It's mostly due to the fact that it's really hard to keep a grudge going. I wanted to show some healing, and while Rainbow didn't go with him, she also didn't do anything against him. A grudge due to inaction is like a heavyweight, and the simple act of talking to her was enough to get rid of it.

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That is fair enough, and likely to happen too.:moustache:

Thanks for the reply!:twilightsmile:

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I read every comment my stories get! I feel like if I didn't do that much I wouldn't deserve so many people enjoying my work.

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Memory fails me - I know from the previous release that Fluttershy was the only one who spoke in his favor, and I know that Twilight spoke against him, with Luna judging him badly.

What was the posture of the other ponies if it was shown in the chapter showing his trial?

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It hasn't been mentioned, but as far as he knows it was null. The only news he really got was from guards, and h hasn't talked to Fluttershy about it outside if what we saw

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Thanks for the heads-up. And now... to wait for the next release.:twilightsmile:

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Yep, the only other thing even remotely like this I have out is Memento Mori, which is done. But past that I only really have comedy so I'll get to work so you can enjoy your fix.

I love this, keep up the good work! I hope we get a confrontation with Luna, would love to see how that plays out!

When can we hopefully expect the next instalment?
Eagerly waiting for the next glorious visit to this hardcore and involuntary Robinson Expedition.

R u doing another one?

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Its on the list.I'm getting married next month so stress and that are kinda killing my mono

I wonder if he'd kill Luna if she showed up.
I kind of hope he at least harms her.

9571166
oh shit, congrats man

I wonder if luna will show up becuse she is the main reason he was exiled if I'm reading it correctly

9571166
Bro congratulations!

I'd like to see how he would act towards Luna, or vice versa.

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That's next idea, but I have many buns in the oven. Both in writing and in life.

This feels pretty forced compared to all the rest. After being cast out and abandoned for so long someone can just say "sorry" like that and its all okay? If so why don't they just all show up to blast him with the friendship beam so they can all go skipping through the feilds together?

Any more? NGL I kinda want to see him kill Pinkie, maybe that'd get them to leave him alone.

I realy hope you continue this sometime. This is a great story

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Will there be a sequel to this in the near future?

If so, I'll be looking forward to it.

9675090
How's it going?

At a writers block or is it just general life barring down on you?
Just wondering because there haven't seen much from your stories lately.

I restrained my base urge to lash out, managing to keep myself from slapping the foolish little pony across her crown. "What happened? You left me for dead in the middle of Hell!" I took a step towards her. "I thought if any of my friends would come and help, it would be the FUCKING ELEMENT OF LOYALTY!" I didn't bother to step forward, instead taking another swig of rum. "But no, I was left on my own to fight, bleed, and kill without a single hoof of help for five fucking years, but maybe that's for the best." I sat down heavily, sand flying in the air from my impact. "I'm sure Twilight told you how poor Blue ended up."

Five? And who’s blue?

For a moment I thought of agreeing. Being able to relax under the sun without care, not having to hunt for every meal. It sounded like paradise. But then I remembered that it was lost. I was the Jack of this twisted version of Lord of the Flies, and I had never heard that Jack went on to lead a happy life, and he was lost for a far shorter time. If one compared us, I would look like a demon. I shook my head. "No, I won't go back to a place where I might hurt somebody." I looked to Rainbow Dash, noticing the thin red line that still marred her beautiful coat. "I already hurt you today, and the only reason you aren't bleeding out on the sand is because you're lucky enough to have blue fur. What happens the first time Pinkie decides I need a surprise party?"

Simple. She’ll probably dodge.

I love these storylines of miss treated humans got to be my favorite type of story

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